i love you poem. its fucking great. i write a lot of poetry myself but usually never like to read anyone elses because they don't fit into my strict set of rules and standards on how poetry "should" be done (atleast my opinion of how it should be done or how i like it) with all that said your poem is beautifully written.
changing the subject : i should be going back to work next weekend (if my shoes come in the mail) ( my old one are toatally shot and about to give out)
and i think i'll have my website (dollmeat.com) up by sunday(hopefully)
i'll let you know when im sure if im working or not because if i am you should come visit me.