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Old Hag

“ That’s the old hag with charcoal hair,

Her skin’s a bluish grey

She sits above the fire escape

Every single day

She sings in some old language,

I couldn’t say the name

It sounds like maybe arabic

But she came from Suriname

I hear one time they robbed her,

Took everything she owned.

She just sat outside and sang

The next day,...
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jacleric:
I love the ambiguous nature of the last two lines... was it the robbers or the spoils that were hanging?   😈 Wonderful
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Perfect Wife

She grooves to the beat of her everyday

struggle

from Mondays to Sundays, her cheeks blushed

scarlet.

She's always dancin', cookin' up a whipped

fiasco

with her hips, sitting on the electric beat, riding the wiry

current.

She gives and gives, and thanks.

That's what good wives do.

She sings to the finches, before they awaken

chirping

out a sweet grey dawn song,...
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jacleric:
Wow.  You are quite a poet, beautiful girl.  I love this one... it captures an old-fashioned and nearly forgotten spirit 💜😍😘
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Raisin

Little calorie eating ticks suck out all of what is plump from my body

Fading away is the life blood of a once curvaceous frame

I wither up, like a sweet golden raisin

I can roll around through the world

As if I rest upon your tongue

Waiting, loungingly, to be crushed between teeth

I'd be a liquid then, so thin, I might evaporate...
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jacleric:
I like it.  Very nice
life_jc:
You put a smile on my face 😊 you gotta share more! Please 😃