Wednesday Sep 12, 2007

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No god deserves my questions.

It made me
human, and so here I am, fulsome
in my flaws.

My fury and confusion
skim the cosmos at their arc,
before catapulting back into
the spitting seas of Earth.
Tell me, Surf,
tell a friend - what are your
objections?

My confidence: mother and child
of it all. No I: no He. See
how my tiny language
proves our tie.
This sceptic averts
an anathemal vacuum.

And no god
has earned my questions yet.



so i'm thinking of doing a suicideboys set. all those in favour say aye.

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markbousfield:
can you give me your email address? I'll send over a wee selection, any changes and suggestions to ones I send over is fine smile

I'm slowly warming to this one, not as instantly accessable as some of your other works, its seems to want to be profound whilst recognising the ego and hopelessness involved in 'talking to God'.

no god has earned my questions yet seems more vulnerable rather than defiant to me
markbousfield:
Interesting you should identify 'god' as a tyrant. i am not religous but tyrant assumes that we have no choice but to believe in God. Each individual has many options open to them in the nature of their belief whether that be in all consuming powers that be or something more segregated and complicated such as Hinduism. Also we have the choice not to believe, and if we are wrong? Well what the Hell, when I meet Peter at the Pearly Gates I guess I'll have no choice but to believe because Heaven is right there in fromnt of me as a reality and then they'll have to let me in anyway right?

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