MISC.
Did her sense
of humour die with the early thrills?
I wonder which is the greater loss
Cars convey
a yawning workforce; everyone I know
who owns a car, complains about it
Too late in the year for a cold shower?
Too early
for immolation?
You must understand that is
a discipline, says
the middle-aged student
And hindered by my wounded fingertip
I am late again
for the gauntlet of sighs
at the moment i'm working through JG Ballard's The Atrocity Exhibition. i say working through rather than reading because this is one of his most difficult novels; on a superficial level, quite fragmented, and on a philosophical level, most unsettling. nobody writes like this man, and i like to think his surgical style has influenced my own writing. he is a master of analogy and symbolism; allow me to share with you a trio of favourite lines:
"Caliban asleep across a mirror stained with vomit"
"like the first homosexual intercourse, in an Apollo space capsule"
"Christ crucified on the sodomized body of his own mother"
ha. genius. ![]()
As for the piece.
Immolation is too strong for the piece.
guantlet of sighs is a brillant line.
The problem is, I don't feel I'm interesting anywhere.
Perhaps I need a break. My words well is close to dry, and there is no sign of rain.
I love when people use the term stomach when refering to books or films. Consider Crash on my "Books to read this Year" list