huck

i like where this is going, so i'm expanding it. bear with me.

She has

doe eyes

greasy hair

some cleavage

a cigarette addiction

a friend who got her the job

a throng-masked scent

an evasive glance

no particular style

non-bearing hips

a nervous gait

bad posture

a bicycle

I havent heard her voice

I havent heard her voice

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valcapone:

Definitely no Jude Law with this package.

Feb 24, 2006

matamoras:

Oh, I like it. Aloud it's really working for me.

Feb 24, 2006

Re: Islam v "The West".

They're idiots. We're assholes. History will remember the Jyllands Posten outrage as a ridiculous episode in our troubled co-existence.

End of argument.

Now can we all get back to destroying the planet as a team?

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roguelibrarian:

There is no "America" in team.

Feb 15, 2006

hotpinkauras:

I just think it all sucks, but ur right bout the team effort! Hope all is well otherwise, take care

Feb 17, 2006

I want to live by the ocean
and throw stones with
the rancour of widows

On any given day
I could stare long into the water
and frighten those who interrupt
by coughing up oil

I want to live by the ocean
and cry hey Poseidon
go fuck yourself
because he and I would have
an understanding

They say all life began in
primordial seas...
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blyss:

Hi handsome....long live eccentric pisces!

xoxo
Blyss

Feb 5, 2006

drake:

I'm calling it a comic because (unlike the trailer) I'm pretty sure the actual thing will be interactive, so the reader will set the pace, turn the page, etc. If anything there could be an even higher level of interactivity in digital comics, if they throw in some simple video game elements.

Feb 7, 2006

here is something that i wrote back in November, and then abandoned, only to resurrect it recently and vastly improve the form and pace. that said, it is still a bit shabby, though that is kinda the point, 'Misc.' as in a stream of consciousness.

MISC.

Did her sense
of humour die with the early thrills?
I wonder which is the greater loss

Cars convey...
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chris_sick:

I'd argue with the genius.

As for the piece.

Immolation is too strong for the piece.

guantlet of sighs is a brillant line.

Jan 26, 2006

ampersand:

To paraphrase a poet-slash-writter I'm rather fond of, [&] is no longer interesting on SuicideGirls

The problem is, I don't feel I'm interesting anywhere.

Perhaps I need a break. My words well is close to dry, and there is no sign of rain.

I love when people use the term stomach when refering to books or films. Consider Crash on my "Books to read this Year" list

Jan 29, 2006

at last, something new (though still in progress):

It is not
an awful life
squandering serendipity
to the point of surfeit, and then
allowing the vengeful morning cramps
to blend with the bellyaches and doldrums
of general excess, until none of it matters
and anything goes

It is not unusual
to close one eye and
through it spy a golden stag
in the headlights of...
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viva:

thanks man,

ive had a couple people talk about it over the past couple years but havent really looked into it

just something i do for fun and to apperantly impress some hot chicks (who would have thunk it?)

When you are a famous star start a magazine with with your good friend george cloony and publish my shit!

Jan 19, 2006

jessickah:

Hold up... Let me rewind this... What did you just say? Still in progress. Excuse my severity, but this is just fucking brutally awesome... Nothing else comes to mind. Hope you don't mind that I read this a few more times... And speaking of severity... You totally crushed the song lyrics with your poetry. As for the song, I'm sure it's great. As for your poetry, absolutely untouchable in my opinion.

Jan 19, 2006

hello all. as i assume you've observed, i tend to post new poems here. this is because i have nothing interesting to say about my life in a straightforward manner. anyway, sad truth is i haven't written anything new since early December (since 'Surprise'). i know, Christmas n all, but this is shameful. so what i've done is gone back to an old piece that...
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y:

I think I went a bit over the top with my attempt to give good advice; I do that sometimes. What I really wanted to say was probably just something like: do what your first instinct tells you and enjoy yourself. I'm sure you know what you're doing as much as any other poet.

A lot of what I said was also just a reflection of my own troubles over the last wee while. I don't really believe that it's impossible to right a good poetic novel; but sometimes I'm sort of blinded to that fact by umpteen different things.

Anyway - onwards and upwards!

J.

Jan 9, 2006

roguelibrarian:

Some kind of bond remains today; the faintest line stretching out across the city, of no consequence unless drawn through the minimum of brick and flesh, when our paths will cross and there follows an incidental.

I really like that line.

Jan 10, 2006

2006

No
thing
to
re
port
oth
er
than
my
be
ing
in
want
of
a
muse
(ment)

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billyfivecrows:

A guy walks into a bar with a frog on his head.

The bartender looks up and says:

"What the fuck is this...?"

The frog says:

"I don't know...it started with a bump on my ass..."

Jan 3, 2006

viva:

happy new year buddy

Jan 4, 2006

SURPRISE

I never believed in
moonlight

Not even in
the village idyll of then
did I stop and notice
the alliance of globes
for the orange pervades
there too

Books
and television told of
moonlight
but
thinking myself astute
I assumed it was
another harmless fantasy

Then one night
while falling home
I understood my path
would not exist
were it not for
and I...
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newmiguel:

happy Hollidaze and stuff

Dec 25, 2005

lamb:

eheeh i made a bet..i must know if she's true

happy new year dear...kiss

Jan 2, 2006

there was a man on the bus
and his face was wrong and
that is called Deformed
and i know i shouldnt look
but i had to check he was real
3 times and now i know what
Deformed is so i wont be
rude again but it did make me
sad because he looked like
someone burned him or
he fell asleep and something...
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cain:

thanks for the love.

Dec 12, 2005

y:

Ta. You're off the hook. Flattery gets you everywhere, you see?

^^She's bonny.

Dec 13, 2005

"Shakespeare is shit"

Charles Bukowski

Discuss.

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fred:

That drunk ole little Bukowski punk ain't got nothin on me.
-- Shakespeare

Well, Shakespeare I think is one of the classics taught everyone for a good reason. Even so I think after 400 years or whatever the language just doesn't truly register with the typical person.
Like billyfivecrows said, you an appreciate it more as written than spoken. For me it mostly sounds like a bunch of archaic language I can only half understand which is annoying.

Bukowski of course is much more modern and relevant but I think his biggest distinction is more his attitude and viewpoint than actual works. That's not entirely fair since I haven't read much of his stuff. But from what I have read that's my impression anyway.
And the whole living in sordid drunken filth as being the way to go just doesn't really make much sense the more you think about it. It seems more like a copout.

Dec 6, 2005

billyfivecrows:

Yeah, it seems the date would make a great title. Perfect.

Me and titles: Sometimes the title is tacked on as an afterthought. Sometimes I get a title and then construct a poem based on the title. Rarely, but it doees happen, it has no title. (I like to play the field within my style!)

**

The Lennon piece was improvised onto my journal, with a little tweaking to clean it up, make it flow. I knew I wanted to write something, but didn't know what. I just opened myself up, and there it was. Glad you liked it.

**

Litkicks is a nice place. Used to be much bigger, kind of like SG, with more boards and more of a community feel, but it was harder to manage, so they pared it down. It's still fun.

I'll check out your piece on there.

Peace

-c.

(Oh...I mildly disagree with FRED. I think Buk's lifestyle was perfectly natural for him. He had no choice. It was research, certainly, but also deeply ingrained. He almost seemed like a Zen master in the middle of it all! Any copout, in my, poinion, is when other writers try to emulate that lifestyle to write like him. God knows I did it, and it almost killed me! I'm into being nicer to myself these days.)

[Edited on Dec 09, 2005 11:37AM]

Dec 9, 2005

Rain Over Bouville
Winter Post
13 new pieces; poetry, photography, assorted canvas work
Now Online

so, it's up. have a look and tell me what you think, and really, be honest. the design is quite a departure from the Autumn Post, and the content itself is a funny mix of light-hearted observation and good old angst, which isn't necessarily a good mix. the image side...
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medeia:

thank you. nice you like it too!

Dec 5, 2005

marigold:

internet explorer v 6.0. i have my resolution set to 800x600. i could screen cap it for you and email you what i'm seeing.

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