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Poe...lit...tickle...irony


There is zero score
And we are today
Fathers and I am entrenched
In a great civil war

Civil, war
Ironic at best
Gettysburg
In a dress

Miscarrying a degenerate
Still born
Son
Of a bitch

Our constitution
A bitch
Of a blind lady
Seeking salvation

A mutt of a tramps dampish
Indifferent
Borderline unholy set of rules
On democracy

People given
Idealism for...
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candycox:
I'm just curious - what inspires you to write? Your poems seem like little word puzzles or a brainflow of thoughts. How exactly do you go about writing them?

Who are your favorite poets? Who influences you and your style?

xoxo

[Edited on Oct 23, 2005 1:30PM]
suburban_relapse:
I still think girls are horrible creatures, but thanks for the insight.
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Lets call this the death circuit...

Dedicated to my grandfather

Get lost
In this mother
Fuckers
And call on my man

Natural born
Better
Than all of us
Heroes

Like Douglas McArthur
And a man
Who bleeds
On my pumpkin

Every Halloween
Or spring
On the ides
Bet of war


To my other grandfather


In a cage fight
With a chicken
Was a jaw
And...
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fred:
I have this idea where all this lines are played in a loop with distortion applied coming from a set of speakers on a persons clothing walking through a crowd.
This is the kind of stuff I'd like to hear on it.

Oh and that was in a meeting so I couldn't just walk out but I considered saying I had to leave. I just acted like a suppressed brat and rolled my eyes and fidgeted.

[Edited on Oct 19, 2005 2:35AM]
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I love you sweetheart...I lost my baby girl today...From the first eye-dropper suckling, until now, stiff as death...about 13 years...I am going to miss her so much....so goddamn much.

My first book is going to be dedicated to her.
The only one who has been with me through every loneliness, every time I conjure words, she whispered to me, the nectar...singing like a lark.

The...
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heatherdlite:
aww. the sadness.

i have birds too. and i love them.

they dont talk to me or anything but they are very nice.


hope you feel better soon.
heatherdlite:
but it's not "just a bird"

he's YOUR bird.

kiss
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Howdy Doody's rubber asshole

I
Highly
Doubt
God

Or anyone
Will
Carry
Me

Away
With
Genius
Prize

Or merit
Subdued
Dude
Rebellion

Cowboy
Infidel
Reunion

Comes
Cheshire
Psychotropic

Dig
Dug
Dang

Mother
Fuck
De-nang

Pull
It
Sir
Lies

I
Seam
Sown
Stitched

Straight
Sub
Marine
Urban

Like
The Missy
Sips
The sea

Drown
Cat
Curiosity

Peddling
Cyclical
Me

Sir
Myrrh
See

God
Gift
Glee




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fred:
I went with the dried squid angle. The birthday thing is overdone.

eccentric:
"My spelling is Wobbly. It's good spelling, but it Wobbles, and the letters get in the wrong places."
-Winnie the Pooh

i think spelling is silly, like umbrellas, wars on isms, more then one fork on a table and manners with no attention to ethics. if you could teach me, you might be complete, but i'd be disheveled and rediculous.

I've been sober myself and trying to find my footing in the world of thought out metaphore instead of accidental dopamine induced insight.

i'm to worried about continuity these days. i watch Flash Dance and notice she's not wearing blue spandex till the second half of the chorigraphy. sinicism now there's an enemy i love to hate enought to start a war on. ....course people in glass houses....should make sure they have the biggest stones.
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Big, grandiose like the glimmer in my eye, that is how I would describe the violent way she shakes an earth with a rattle and hum worshipping gospel perversion, the bottoms of her feet punishing the mattress for dog day splayed menstrual breathe. To describe her, as prismatic idiocy would be clairvoyant, to mention her as deranged would be sufficient, but of carnal pleurisyor admonished...
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billyfivecrows:
this clown

aint big enough

for the
two
of
us. grease

paint
denied. ashes

of a
burnt
rooster

in negative

applied
billyfivecrows:
sizzling
satyr

seeing-eye
frog

hearing-eye
dog

throat-shy
man

horsemeat and viridan

tendon

jumping

in the

pan

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We gotta get out of this place, if its the last thing we ever do....we gotta get out of this place, cus...girl, there's a better life for me and you.....except without the we, and the girl part...I need some new scenery folks, I can't find anymore inspiration sitting in my tower overlooking the dire end of summer...I need to kneaded...


I am blatant, and blind,...
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candycox:
Your last couple of entries have just blown me away. Your words always boggle my mind and I love it.

xoxo
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I have an ulcer on my eye...because I roll like that, hardcore never take the contacts out...apparently I should be hospitalized because most adults can't administer eye drops once every hour....right...I am glad my opthamologist doesn't think I am mentally challenged...So...I am raising a glass and toasting scar tissue outside my field of vision...coo-coo cachoo...mrs. robinson, jesus loves you more than you may know...whoa-whoa-whoa...oh-oh-oh...




I...
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fred:
I might say it could use some editing but then again that seems to go against t and make it not possible to get that kind of inner flow.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

fiery spiraling liquid fire dreams
high kite colonic
basement ceiling cinema porn
Joyriding mom's chevy
donuts in the desert
smoking grandpa's best shit

Full throttle vision riding
burning diesel constructions
comet shuttle speed rapper
The best time ever
circles, fast
we crashed.

rearview mirror
the fried chicken juice of the past
dessicated
Movement in mind
Heart -- the charcoal sponge
husk
gazing out the angry hard man prison
it's venus quicksand woman trapping brethren


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eccentric:
in truth, some would deffine me as a Cathoilic school, girl "TYPE" in all honesty, i think my guilt over a love for life has more to do with rosary beads then my rebellion from a faith i have no inate hatred for. some might call me a "Camel Jocky", "Sand Niger", "Half Bread" or better yet, and more creative "Gypsy Mongrel". I say i am whater its PC to get away with calling me atr the moment. Some would call me a hippy, some would claim i'm too conservative for pachuli. my journalism prof. called me the queen of focinating simili...she also noted my bad spelling. my roomate said I'm "an explosion of tacky tones, rage, distorted beauty and destruction. On stage, her empty ammunition belt sits around her waist, the ammunition transferred to her tongue". i haven't been on stage for 5 months....a cat with writers block has my tongue...and worse, i'm allergic to cats. I have a significant other...it is hard because i am used to haveing insignificant others. i wear my heart on my sleeve, but oly while holding a revolver. you related my essence to disco...funny my parents met in one, i tipically dislike the music...but would dance my ass off to it apon the apropraite request. and a synth pop princes....sure, but one who hopes she can really sing...i also color on occasion....outside the lines.



one true thing: i did not read your whole post before commenting...i need a better time to procrastinate, during class perhapse, wheni'm not soar from leaping around martha gram style apon the request of some half crazy dance teacher who took to much acid and not enough time out 30 years ago to love, masterbate, or have sex (or a more romantic version of all three).

-the starving artist formerly known as RhainnonWaits....what can i say...i got impacient.
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Does Jim make you beam or does Jose want to kill you



There is a mellifluous hammer
Beating
To chirp
Carolina parakeet rock-opera

Into stink
Muddy
Waters
And Memphis banks

Three nickels
Two spoons
One willing
Tune

Old
Blue
Gum
Bloody

Hickory
Lullaby
Miscarried
Babies dictating

Bee
Cost
Per honey
Barrel

Of perfunctory electric
Boogaloo
Beefalo
Comfortable

Dcor
Slanderous
Heresy
And tide

Schizophrenic
Worthy
For...
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billyfivecrows:
nucleus hourglass

watermellonseed straightjacket

mezcal milkmaid

toothpick jousting

ousting

nothing

keepingfrom

fitting

in

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Take every word as literal
This is truth
For all you people who want to scream
At the government
Go fuck yourself
This matter has nothing to do with partisanship
This disaster is of awesome natural context
Global warming has been going on for thousands of years
Since man burnt coal
Man has changed the environment
Since the dawn of known time
We have always...
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billyfivecrows:
Holy Nihilist.

(Not a contridiction.)

Infinity is not a concept.

(No seperation for
Conceiver to
Consider, no place else
To stand to dream
There's only
"Here" it's)

Always
Today. Sure, God

Is metaphorical
Of man. Stone.
Banana. Turtle. Hair.
RPG. STD. Boy. Girl. Boat.
(Float) awhile
Through a supernova, now

There's an
Illusion. Quite

A show, but we know

It's not real, doesn't matter.

360 sunset spurged, purged
Blended into dark-mud
Jesus-blood. A milkshake.

A picnic on a bride's back, a bridge.

People starving over the ridge

Let them eat prana...

candycox:
I really enjoyed this.

A stream of consciousness of sorts?

Brutally honest, stripped of romantic metaphors, to the point, to the heart...


xoxo, CC
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The vast
Peculiar
Existence
Beneath you

Tastes of
Cookies
Church
Candid

Bare
Skinned
Fire spark
Flint

Tassel
Rampart
Ember
Hallowed

And
Like democracy
The child
Blind

As the adage
Talks
Of knowing
Now, what of then

Of rapid
Eyes
Direly
Frivolous

And buxom
Stranded
Sugar cane
Tipsy

Filthy
Fucked
Under groping palm
Jealousy

Coco
Nut
Milk
White

Light
Mare
Fairy
Tail

Engines
Spontaneously combusting
Rusting...
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abyssia:
"I tend to be thoughtful enough to rationally cause and escape my own reality." That sounds to me like you've got quite a bit of control over your reality. I find myself wondering if you ever relinquish that control and, if you do, how you experience it.

I used to leave my toys out too.