Bad habits from foaming mouths, gun mount molestations, infatuations with brill shrimp and brine, subtle butter in southern Minnesota, cars in a creamy delinquency, infancy of melted curdled unbridled dairy land delight, winter daylight slim like none and poetic like pathetic magistrate wisdom from a sand grain, and beaches tranquility from a lord, a big bad ole man with the how the west was won...
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I thought about being creative and just decided to say screw it...it's not exactly like anybody ever reads the really long pieces I post...who has that much time...and who really cares but me...it's not like anyone ever responds...even in "Groups" feedback is always limited...screw it...happy weekend to me...happy weekend to me...yeah!
I am not the dork. I am not the spoon on the plate. I am not the loner in the closet looking for a celibate. I am just the man with a brain living in a neurotique. I am normal fit, cool to a chance. I am visual, attractive to hype. I am elemental, experienced to soil. I am thinky, from tonic. I am calculated,...
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trixie:
So you think i'm hot so i should be sad? Hmmm, gee that makes everything better. I see myself in the mirror every day so perhaps i'm not quite as overwhelmed by my supposed hottness as you are. But i don't care about hot and not hot right now. I care about what is going on inside and what other people think of that. If people reject you for your looks, who cares? If they reject you for you...that is what hurts. And besides i don't bitch about thinking i'm not atttractive, all i bitch about is being bored with looking the same every day. I have a short attention span.
hellsforheroes:
Yeah...I was just trying to be cheerful...and wanted you to know that your hotness makes my day...bonus for me...you and chloe together...so hot... as for crazy ass minnesota people, we aren't very nice people, we pretend...it's all two faced...the whole Minnesota nice thing is bull shit...flat out...I have always liked pushing minnesotan buttons...I say screw the work girls...if people don't like you...most of the time they don't like themselves...ie jealousy etc....kill em with obstinence or kindness your choice...
You have to be always drunk. That's all there is to it--it's the
only way. So as not to feel the horrible burden of time that breaks
your back and bends you to the earth, you have to be continually
drunk.
But on what? Wine, poetry or virtue, as you wish. But be
drunk.
And if sometimes, on the steps of a palace or the...
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only way. So as not to feel the horrible burden of time that breaks
your back and bends you to the earth, you have to be continually
drunk.
But on what? Wine, poetry or virtue, as you wish. But be
drunk.
And if sometimes, on the steps of a palace or the...
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My baby is looking to jet set some star crossed bridgeI see well into a world I dont have the tools to dare so, so romantically, oh my little knees are weak, and, and my laugh just doesnt ring, like the telephone call you used to make when it rained from the eyes of the seventh harp angel shoestringheavens hath no courage but a butter...
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There was a lady on some random television show...I just overheard it and became intrigued, the lady smokes 3 ounces of pot a week by herself, over nine pounds a year...and I thought I had to tone down my act...oh yeah I forgot, the lady has brain cancer and the pot is legal...some people have all the luck, she has no future for sure, and...
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Sergeant somebody in my window sill pitching me Lilliputian romance, fuck off, I dont want to hear no serious stuff no, no Cyrano you can not come with me to see the trespasses of my plum garland scarlet remnant tangent turvy, moon shots all I got, whore, she is my girl officer, without a gentlemen, just me, loving her right, I pray forcing her to...
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kungfuvoodoo:
So, you wana join the guild?
(Generic greeting everyone gets)
Sign in the welcome
This is a feedback-oriented group, comment, critique and contribute!
Make ready your contributions and comments, and as astronauts in to the unknown, come what may and what not.
Welcome, feel free to butcher, rewrite, or complement your fellow writers work, as this is a get into it group, the main reason for it being private. We are all pros, can take it, and invite the commentary to improve or sharpen perceptions. Although we are definitely not here to attack the individual, the intent is to provide support to the truth seekers.
Infringing upon copyright is expressly discouraged; please respect the hard work of your fellow artists. We hope to inspire, contribute and know our rights are protected, as this is the primary reason this is a private group. No work is to leave the group without the express consent of the author. You will be removed from the group and face legal ramifications. We are here to be real.
All writing styles, subjects, and interests are as different as the individual and after we get going we may choose to require a submission to enter.
With that said.
Welcome aboard and feel free to contribute, comment, and contact me anytime.
-SSilver
Welcome
So, you wana join the guild?
(Generic greeting everyone gets)
Sign in the welcome
This is a feedback-oriented group, comment, critique and contribute!
Make ready your contributions and comments, and as astronauts in to the unknown, come what may and what not.
Welcome, feel free to butcher, rewrite, or complement your fellow writers work, as this is a get into it group, the main reason for it being private. We are all pros, can take it, and invite the commentary to improve or sharpen perceptions. Although we are definitely not here to attack the individual, the intent is to provide support to the truth seekers.
Infringing upon copyright is expressly discouraged; please respect the hard work of your fellow artists. We hope to inspire, contribute and know our rights are protected, as this is the primary reason this is a private group. No work is to leave the group without the express consent of the author. You will be removed from the group and face legal ramifications. We are here to be real.
All writing styles, subjects, and interests are as different as the individual and after we get going we may choose to require a submission to enter.
With that said.
Welcome aboard and feel free to contribute, comment, and contact me anytime.
-SSilver
Welcome
Look at me. See what it is. See the colors wash. See the colors wash the visions of tomorrow sparkling. Focus your eyes toward the horizon, because the sun is merry. It is not setting, but rather just basking itself. What happens when the sun wants to watch a sunset, what does it do? It just grabs a cocktail and drinks bottomless. It closes its...
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Out there in the universe of infinite propositions was a chance. In an infinite boundary of options, was one. In a total crap shoot of gritty survival of a horrid fittest, was an inspiration, a universe of something so unholy. An enigmatic world of deranged infused catatonic eunuch preserved love. An earth was born, a cosmic whimpering child of rock tortured by unforgivable burning sadistic...
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amethyst:
nope, nothing to do with pacman at all. I just really like fruits I figured it would be a cute idea. I've had so many people on here ask me that actually, I don't know much about the game at all but most assume I'm obsessed with it lol
Sweaty palms hold me a crucifix
hold a wander of Maine.
The depths I want to fathom
the serial pittance of lambs blood.
Boiling a potato on a starch collar
to the dead dog Plutos lullaby.
Alfred I dont know
do I want far to go America.
Oh my vertigo wishes.
Oh my appaloosas whore.
Stairs like elevator stares at Bellevue
holy roman me now...
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hold a wander of Maine.
The depths I want to fathom
the serial pittance of lambs blood.
Boiling a potato on a starch collar
to the dead dog Plutos lullaby.
Alfred I dont know
do I want far to go America.
Oh my vertigo wishes.
Oh my appaloosas whore.
Stairs like elevator stares at Bellevue
holy roman me now...
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madi:
I like your writing, thanks for the sweet comment. Want to friends?
And how do I deal with them being venemous? Their cages lock shut, the room they are in is locked shut, and it's not like you would ever handle them. If you need to move them you do it with a snake hook. This is pretty standard procedure.
You don't play with your fish in the fish tank, and you don't play with the snakes in the tank either. You replicate their habitat as best you can in the tank and watch 'em. They're beautiful.