Wednesday Dec 15, 2004

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Haiku Ambulance
Richard Brautigan



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A piece of green pepper
fell
off the wooden salad bowl:
so what?
tangent_one:
thanks for the compliment...don't worry...i've never had a swollen head...well...except that one time i fell down the stairs...
abra:
i love richard brautigan.

Tuesday Dec 14, 2004

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It never ceases to amaze me...if i was at my computer typing...wouldn't it be the same thing as if a tree was falling in the woods.....with no one around to hear it...or read it...I might be done posting anything I write...right...because this message is going to be noticed...maybe I will stop journalling myself and just comment on other peoples daily life...inherently searching for something witty...
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the_gentleman:
Someone always comes along to ruin the fun and comment. So umm...

*ruins fun*

Monday Dec 13, 2004

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If I ever write a sport it must be bladed
Angry metal spark saviors, cunning swords
Champion, in French I swore my lord
The great onei-m-o-r-t-a-l-i-t-y

Pioneer hatchets of golden men
New York calmly prayed away stars
For a flag to nations, check, stick
Cherries in disguise tonight

Slurring tongues never stitched a face
Off and times rinking rubber breathe
How is it Mr. Forever?...
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Monday Dec 13, 2004

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I want my media oak gritty
Charmed by fourth street
And whose on first
A bit costly though

The horse harboring of plumbs
I had chopped a slave lady
For the pyromania in shoes
Its best host as best host

Turf turtle waxy campaigns
Benedictine laboring viagra
I couldn't handle romance
And the middle has soft meat

Hear or me now
A canned yawn in...
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Saturday Dec 11, 2004

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That starlight fades; starlights fadeis a symposium, an honorarium to poets words
I want to dis-courage, discouraging words, seldom not so much, not absurdenough
Were ids, really that important anyway, any weight of thought, way enoughLucidity
Coughing coffins, desire-less flesh, malevolence for goodness, good is a veil, anvil
An evil in the gutter, the cellar of discontent, of content, Inot so much content...tent
Sister fist,...
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abra:
i liked reading this.

Friday Dec 10, 2004

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A million
Censor then
Fare in height
Fannies.

People.
Think.
What People?.
Think.

Why?.
Art people
Piss paints.
Remember M.

I
Flick someone
Off.
Flip stripped.

Justin Code
Ear
Here
Oh.

One word
Graduate.
Mork and Mindy.
Hey eye.

Machine
commuting.
Butt
Hippo eyes.

The
Needs.
Treasons reasons
Oxen tourists.

Us and them.
Children.
The official art.
Dreaming twos.

Thursday Dec 09, 2004

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Slowly, gentlemen slowly, it is time to take this to another level. It is the destiny of finishing off the prominent man in the sentiment glory of something abstract, a mention of suspended motion, I mean what the hell is the point, I killed the virus. I think this is the stupidest thing I have ever written. Dangerously, gone, like a vacuum of thought, the...
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kybella:
Hm. What to say, what to say.

Write something about the things you know about me. That would be nice...

Thursday Dec 09, 2004

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As my life continuslly drifts forward I have recognized two unalienable things....there are a ton of people smoking weed in this world...and for some odd reason the dealers always love me...they turn out to be the people I chose to befriend, before I know what's what...it's not like I care...but seriously..coincidence I think not....oh yeah i dont buy from dealer friends.

Tuesday Dec 07, 2004

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Inventing Father In Las Vegas
Lynn Emanuel



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If I could see nothing but the smoke
From the tip of his cigar, I would know everything
About the years before the war.
If his face were halved by shadow I would know
This was a street where an EATS sign trembled
And a Greek served coffee black as a dog's eye.
If I could see...
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Tuesday Dec 07, 2004

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Levity in disguise
Thats what I mentioned
The half broken forever speed
The galaxy in a fleck

I say pray in lies
I say lockdown the cherry
Puncture my roman heart
I shout light is my daisy

Leaving me my lyrics
Following me my soldier
Welcoming me my arithmetic
Logic holds no beauties candle

Long crisp men of slant
Whimsy darlings of the misconceived
Fred...
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hellsforheroes:
For sure about the spanish...that's pretty damn close....as for the poem...wow...this takes a little time, there are quite a references, and so I will try mind you, this will be only a certain aspect of the piece...........Okay first stanza...it's about what i call half bent light, sunset light, the power of light, how light, photons offer every possible existence, light shining through a slit in a piece of paper, randomly attempts all possible routes, through the paper, through the slit, around the paper, light continually and to scientific knowledge attempts all fates at once....it's ideally though about the light in a woman's eye, the twinkle...about how eyes are transfixed and floating, galaxies in a glint, the tiniest reflection, something so simple, yet so masterfully intricate..........
hellsforheroes:
second verse is about....the love theme....the metaphors are pretty simple...I hope.........third verse...same thing as second.....the words describing a condition...a feeling....the fourth verse introduces a main theme of the piece the movie casablanca...and in some ways the celluloid heroes...of contemporary times...also infusing the love theme...and ahh...ideally it's like casblanca...ending broekn hearted...not happy, but torn....bitter sweet....I could explain each word in depth...and each metaphor...but that takes the fun out of it...I like that someone has to cryptically figure out what I am saying...think of black and pearl likeblack and white film....there are also geographic references infused...spain...africa...leading to casablanca...decode the piece...it will reveal itself.its titled reincarnation...oh and feel free to draw your own conclusions...I promise I have reasons for everything in there...and I have expanded most metaphors in my head
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