I didn't do a lot for my birthday. My girlfriend and I tried a new restaurant that we both really liked. It's nice to know of there's a good Korean restaurant on Long Island, so I don't have to go into New York every time I want Korean food--and I love Korean food!
I showed my girlfriend the first draft of my screenplay, "Bordertown." In...
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I'm reading a great book,"Bad Neighbor Policy: Washington's Futile War on Drugs in Latin America" by Cato Institute scholar Ted Galen Carpenter. It is a penetrating examination of America's vain attempts, under both Republican and Democratic administrations, to stop drug trafficking in Latin America and the Caribbean.
When he first declared a "war on drugs," Richard Nixon was simply using a metaphor. We should make...
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When he first declared a "war on drugs," Richard Nixon was simply using a metaphor. We should make...
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lostidentity:
Happy Birthday!!!
I think one of the best ways to handle the drug problem is rather than cut out supply, cut out the demand, but maybe thats easier said than done.
I think one of the best ways to handle the drug problem is rather than cut out supply, cut out the demand, but maybe thats easier said than done.
latchbeam:
Hey, you have to update on your birthday and tell people what you did!
So far I've written about 30 pages, the first act, of my screenplay, Bordertown. The story so far: When wrestler-turned-private-detective Pocho Martinez, realizes that one of the men behind an assassination was also involved in the Tlatelolco Massacre, in which many of Pocho's friends died, he agrees to investigate the murder on behalf of the politician's widow.
The writing is going well, except I now...
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The writing is going well, except I now...
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kreatinkaos:
I'm sure something will come to mind

The Final Draft 7 software came today. It's a little different than the old version. I had a few questions that weren't answered in the manual, but they were answered by the Final Draft web site.
So far, it's going well. I should easily be able finish in a month, provided I average 4 pages a day, since a screenplay shouldn't exceed 120 pages. Of...
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So far, it's going well. I should easily be able finish in a month, provided I average 4 pages a day, since a screenplay shouldn't exceed 120 pages. Of...
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latchbeam:
Awesome!!!
mikeyangel:
Swwet, just got FD7 myself. Love it.
Cheers to that mate!
Cheers to that mate!
I'm ready to start a new draft of my screenplay. I have it all worked out on index cards. I'm just waiting for UPS to deliver my new screenwriting software.
I ordered Final Draft 7.1, which has a pdf converter that supposedly works better than Final Draft 6's file converter system. Anyway, once I finish the script, which will be in about a month, I'll...
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I ordered Final Draft 7.1, which has a pdf converter that supposedly works better than Final Draft 6's file converter system. Anyway, once I finish the script, which will be in about a month, I'll...
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anberlynn:
Thankyou!

lostidentity:
I love stories that have to do with events that weren't in the public american eye....well, I shouldn't say that, I wasn't around in 1968, but have never heard of that event until just now.
Here's another character bio from my screenplay "Bordertown"--this one of Rafael Osorio, the Army General who's supposed to be involved in drug interdiction but is really involved in drug trafficking. You can see I've really developed the plot, connecting the General, the DFS (secret police) Commander and the drug mafia padrino.
Let me know what you think and if you have any ideas. I really...
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propernoun:
Nah.
Actually, I was expecting my friends list to be cut in half when I came back.

Actually, I was expecting my friends list to be cut in half when I came back.

propernoun:
And welcome back to you, too! 

In my screenplay "Bordertown," a candidate for the governership of a Mexican border state, Chubasco, is assassinated for suppporting Mexico's particiaption in an anti-narcotics air-fleet under Pentagon command.
General Osorio, the local army commandante who orders the assiassination, is one of the script's two major villains, the other being the former DFS commander behind the Tlatelolco Massacre. I got the idea for Osorio, when I...
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General Osorio, the local army commandante who orders the assiassination, is one of the script's two major villains, the other being the former DFS commander behind the Tlatelolco Massacre. I got the idea for Osorio, when I...
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kreatinkaos:
I wish I had the creativity and patience to write like that
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[Edited on Dec 21, 2005 6:29PM]
_chris_:
I would try to think of some way to humanise him, somehow. Give him some sort of link to the "common people", or something that makes him "less" villainish from one perspective, yet just as antagonizing at the same time, perhaps...
I read something a while back about Nazi soldiers during WWII, and that while many of them were indeed wrapped up in the ridiculousness of the whole Nazi party thing, a lot of them were simply soldiers who were going to work every day to put food on the tables for their wives and children. This made their apparent lack of humanity towards their concentration-camp prisoners, and the Allied forces, that much more disturbing...
I also read somewhere, about the fact that while the cartels in South America were ruthlessly cruel and murderous to their competition and people trying to shut them down in the 70s and 80s, they were extremely generous, sometimes to a fault, with the local and surrounding communities, using cash out of their pockets to build schools and hospitals...
I don't know. You said you didn't want him to be a simple cartoony, one-dimensional type of character. I personally find characters who aren't really "villains" (in the purest sense of the word), yet find themselves and their goals to be completely at odds with someone else, to be much more interesting in the long run... They actually believe in what they're doing, they personally have some sort of internal drive behind their actions, a personal investment, rather than simply serving as a foil to the main character, or protagonist...
Find some way to link him to the candidate picked to be assassinated. Make it personal, moreso than simply as a threat to "business". Give him a reason not to do it, and then when it does finally happen, then maybe that action will have even more impact.
Think about the scene in the Godfather, when Michael has Fredo killed. It's such a simple thing for a director and screenwriter to sit down and do, yet it had such an impact on the story... The whole "kiss scene" at the party? Yep. That's the kind of impact I'm thinking of...
Sorry this turned out to be so long... I don't even know what I'm talking about, really. That's just what happened to pop into my head right now... See ya.
I read something a while back about Nazi soldiers during WWII, and that while many of them were indeed wrapped up in the ridiculousness of the whole Nazi party thing, a lot of them were simply soldiers who were going to work every day to put food on the tables for their wives and children. This made their apparent lack of humanity towards their concentration-camp prisoners, and the Allied forces, that much more disturbing...
I also read somewhere, about the fact that while the cartels in South America were ruthlessly cruel and murderous to their competition and people trying to shut them down in the 70s and 80s, they were extremely generous, sometimes to a fault, with the local and surrounding communities, using cash out of their pockets to build schools and hospitals...
I don't know. You said you didn't want him to be a simple cartoony, one-dimensional type of character. I personally find characters who aren't really "villains" (in the purest sense of the word), yet find themselves and their goals to be completely at odds with someone else, to be much more interesting in the long run... They actually believe in what they're doing, they personally have some sort of internal drive behind their actions, a personal investment, rather than simply serving as a foil to the main character, or protagonist...
Find some way to link him to the candidate picked to be assassinated. Make it personal, moreso than simply as a threat to "business". Give him a reason not to do it, and then when it does finally happen, then maybe that action will have even more impact.
Think about the scene in the Godfather, when Michael has Fredo killed. It's such a simple thing for a director and screenwriter to sit down and do, yet it had such an impact on the story... The whole "kiss scene" at the party? Yep. That's the kind of impact I'm thinking of...
Sorry this turned out to be so long... I don't even know what I'm talking about, really. That's just what happened to pop into my head right now... See ya.
I'm considering starting a website for my crafts gallery. I want to sell items from the site and also use the site to drum up business for my brick and mortar store. Can anyone recommend a good, inexpensive web host?
kreatinkaos:
I'm back

frost:
thank you!

I'm still working on my "Bordertown" screenplay. In particular, I've been working on the characters.
I've changed Pocho's sidekick, who was originally a nebbishy Woody Allenish character named Jon Bloom. Now he's an undersize, but gutsy grappler named Bobby Bazarov.
Bobby came from a wrestling family. His father, who started out at the height of the Cold War, changed his name from Jonathan Bloom to...
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I've changed Pocho's sidekick, who was originally a nebbishy Woody Allenish character named Jon Bloom. Now he's an undersize, but gutsy grappler named Bobby Bazarov.
Bobby came from a wrestling family. His father, who started out at the height of the Cold War, changed his name from Jonathan Bloom to...
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lizarose:
sounds like a great story!
thanks for the comment on my set...
thanks for the comment on my set...

mneylu:
woops1 i mised you set comment from forever ago completely.
thanks
like you are goig to make an "m" sound but then surprise people and say "n". it's like "(m)-nyay-loo
no significance.. from a russian song .. some phoenetic stuff i thought sounded nice.
thanks
like you are goig to make an "m" sound but then surprise people and say "n". it's like "(m)-nyay-loo

no significance.. from a russian song .. some phoenetic stuff i thought sounded nice.

I rented "The Day After Tomorrow" and I'm not sure I understood it. I didn't know too much about the film ahead of time, except that it involved global warming triggering an ice age. How is that possible? Well, according to the Dennis Quaid character, melting polar icecaps upset the oceans' salt balance, which disturbed the Atlantic current, which in turn, caused cooling of the...
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xip:
RE:almost died
I was really sick, I laid down stared up at the ceiling and accepted the fact that I was positive I was dying at that instant.
It was the most sublime sense of apathy and peace I've ever felt. Nothing mattered. not even what I'd "done" or "not done". didn't matter.
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I was really sick, I laid down stared up at the ceiling and accepted the fact that I was positive I was dying at that instant.
It was the most sublime sense of apathy and peace I've ever felt. Nothing mattered. not even what I'd "done" or "not done". didn't matter.
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frost:
i will try and get some rest. it just sucks that i have to work my ass off right now because i have 3 weeks off! oh well...
Mexico hit by fresh wave of drug killings Sat Jan 21, 1:11 AM ET
Drug gangs mowed down three people in a drive-by shooting in Acapulco on Friday, a day after members of a drug cartel in the northern border town of Nuevo Laredo murdered 3 others and set their bodies on fire.
The killers in the Pacific resort of Acapulco shot their victims in the street in an outlying district of the city, home to some 700,000 people.
"The characteristics of the crime show it was an execution by those who are caught up in drugs," Acapulco Mayor Felix Salgado said.
A feud between rival drug gangs broke out in Acapulco in 2005, surprising Mexicans more used to drug violence on the U.S. border or in the drug-producing states of western Mexico.
Last year, the deputy head of a state police force was shot dead leaving a beachside restaurant and suspected members of a drug gang attacked a police station with grenades.
Tourists have not been involved in the violence and Salgado said the city, popular with U.S. visitors, was safe.
"People involved in illicit activities have problems, but tourists are respected here, they walk about here, they are looked after here," he said.
More than 1,000 people died in drug killings in Mexico last year, mostly in a fight between the Gulf cartel in northeastern Mexico and an alliance of traffickers from the western state of Sinaloa.
On Thursday, firemen in Nuevo Laredo found the bodies of three men who had been shot and set ablaze to warn off rivals in a drug war that has claimed 16 victims this month in the town, just across the Rio Grande from Laredo, Texas.
The bodies were found in the trunk of a burning sport utility vehicle. Two of the men were handcuffed.
Dousing victims with gasoline and burning them is a favored tactic of the warring cartels, designed to spread fear.
Nuevo Laredo is on the front line of a war for control of the lucrative cross-border trade in cocaine, heroin and marijuana. Border violence has increased since Mexican President Vicente Fox declared war on drug cartels a year ago.
Fox temporarily ordered the army on to the streets in June, after the city's newly appointed public security chief was gunned down on the day of his appointment.
The U.S. State Department has issued several travel alerts for Nuevo Laredo in the past year, warning that drug-related violence was getting out of hand in border cities.