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Monday Oct 10, 2005

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Intensity -- the sudden rush
floating icy cold rapids, drifting frozen
Following gravel affairs of the shoreline
rush again, take away

Taking off, the drag
four second into orbit
satellites amiss, preoccupied wandering
looking down upon
the thermo-nimbulus emotional complex

Yank away
the glamour hatch mystery escape session
ten flights of fascination, a rope, a swinging door
Each western landscape panorama
has runaway train caboose seating
Every effort is pulling, gripping

It is inviolable immolation
doled out day by day
the sliding hours drag
burning the eyes

Voltage requires resistance
fusebox activity, crackle and glisten
The human vessel playground
and its silent narrative phantasm

Acrid flaming hearts
smoldering in the empty night
flashlights against clouds
searching for evidence
candycox:
Beautiful. I really love the last stanza: "acrid flaming hearts..." Really slides along the tongue.

Hope you're doing well. The damage on my car is fucking $500. FUCK!!! When it rains, it pours.

xoxo
Oct 10, 2005
fpkk:
I was tried and found not only rubbish but unemployed also. Oh well. Thees are the breaks. smile
Oct 10, 2005

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