So I'm in this weird situation right now, and I can't figure out whether it's out of high school or Sex and the City. I'm thinking high school, 'cause it's pretty lame and I'm thinking about it way too more than it probably deserve. Although they do that in SatC, too. Anyway, so I took this one undergrad lit class last semester, and I felt...
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starguitar:
Yeah I remember that set! Totally awesome 
letigre:
arrogant bitch...hehehe. i think it would be a good idea to work the bf in to a conversation, just be suttle about it.
So I'm in this weird situation right now, and I can't figure out whether it's out of high school or Sex and the City. I'm thinking high school, 'cause it's pretty lame and I'm thinking about it way too more than it probably deserve. Although they do that in SatC, too. Anyway, so I took this one undergrad lit class last semester, and I felt...
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as pro,ised, a short-short story. crit welcome. I'm told the last line isn't the right last line but I don't know what is.
Sushi-A-Go-Go
He picked up a piece of fish with his chopsticks and placed it in her mouth.
Thats some good fish, she said.
You want some more?
I want some of that, she said, and pointed across the restaurant with her own...
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Sushi-A-Go-Go
He picked up a piece of fish with his chopsticks and placed it in her mouth.
Thats some good fish, she said.
You want some more?
I want some of that, she said, and pointed across the restaurant with her own...
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ladymaze:
New last line: "You know, you're not the only fish in the sea."
BWAHAHAHA! Oh, I crack me up. 
Honestly, though...how about something a little less hyperbolic and a little more immediate, such as, "You know, you're not the only one here."
Other than that last line bit...which, honestly, I only mentioned because you mentioned...I like this. The spare language and the repetitions of some words ("enough," "game," "shitty," "empty"), and the structural parallelisms (Have some fish, Aline, she said.
Thats okay, said Aline, I just ate.) are very effective.
Did you intend that, in a way, you ended with the "he" being optimistic, in that his plate is half-full, rather than half-empty?
BWAHAHAHA! Oh, I crack me up.
Honestly, though...how about something a little less hyperbolic and a little more immediate, such as, "You know, you're not the only one here."
Other than that last line bit...which, honestly, I only mentioned because you mentioned...I like this. The spare language and the repetitions of some words ("enough," "game," "shitty," "empty"), and the structural parallelisms (Have some fish, Aline, she said.
Thats okay, said Aline, I just ate.) are very effective.
Did you intend that, in a way, you ended with the "he" being optimistic, in that his plate is half-full, rather than half-empty?
dewees:
yes it was so fun to hang out with you, too! and i'll be back in march. and then maybe later i 'll come for good. or months. 
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elora1:
you are almost to my house.
too bad i'm not there.
i hope i'm done in time to come home.
too bad i'm not there.
i hope i'm done in time to come home.
letigre:
yes.
In other news:
Our new roommate needs to take a serious chill pill. Seriously.
Jealousy makes life harder.
My short-short story prof thinks I rule.
I need a second job.
Our new roommate needs to take a serious chill pill. Seriously.
Jealousy makes life harder.
My short-short story prof thinks I rule.
I need a second job.
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kenyon:
ahh, professor love/praise . . . how i miss it!
finklestein:
Send short stories! ...and I lost your number so I don't know what's up with dinner tonight.
And it was a happy day. Nothing amazing happened, just a day. I finished work earlier than I expected, I had a burrito, I went to class, I watched some Nip/Tuck...but best of all, I didn't freak out. Yay, me!
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kenyon:
i think i'm a lightweight - i like nip/tuck, but often i have to look away. it's just TOO MUCH TOO FAST.
and yeah, i found foot/shoe pervert on craigslist, aka pervlist.
and yeah, i found foot/shoe pervert on craigslist, aka pervlist.
letigre:
you will see.
Today is gonna be a happy day.
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fridgemagnet:
So!?!
letigre:
pirates say yarrrr. dont they?
pirates say yarrrr. dont they?Well, I had a nice little meltdown today, the weather is crap & didn't really have any plans to begin with, so I think I'm gonna spend this New Year's Eve hunkering down on the couch with my boy and a nice spicy Cab, finally responding to my plethora of birthday comments. Happy New Year, y'all. 
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fridgemagnet:
Impossible sir, it's in Johnson's shorts.
First semester of grad school: check.
Happy birthday to meeeee!
Happy birthday to meeeee!
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bleakronin:
HOPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
King James
HOPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
King James
anja:
miss you! *kisses*
current word count: 3,431. Goal: 4,200. Time left: 3 hours. That's 250 words an hour. Think I can do it?
update: 12:53. 3,753 words. And yes, I should stay off SG. But it helps to know I'm being watched
update: 3:24. Okay, I passed my goal. I coulda sworn 4,200 words was at least 15 pages, but I'm up to 4,496 and I'm only at...
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update: 12:53. 3,753 words. And yes, I should stay off SG. But it helps to know I'm being watched
update: 3:24. Okay, I passed my goal. I coulda sworn 4,200 words was at least 15 pages, but I'm up to 4,496 and I'm only at...
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mya22:
GO GO GO!!!
lotusmonger:
whatever happened to "quality not quantity"? 