Since my internet is still acting up, I am going to just post a short poem for all of you to enjoy. Once the internet gets repaired and actually lets me load pages without waiting 15-20 minutes, I will write a more updated blog. My Easter is going well, but I have a very busy week next week. So I will have plenty to write about after the repairman comes on Monday or Tuesday. I would love to get some constructive criticism on my writing so feel free to do so. Until my return, I hope everyone is well! 
Oh and yeah, I noticed a lot of the members on here are getting Facebook pages. I am on Facebook as well. If anyone wants to befriend me on there as well, then I will include a link before the poem. I also have a fan page for the book on poetry that I have published. I will include a link for it as well. Sadly, at the moment I do not have many fans. Does that mean, I suck? I guess you guys can be the judge after I post the poem. It is by the way included in my book
As for Facebook itself, can be quite addicting. I am on there a lot more as a recent. It tends to load a little faster for me, than SG because it has less pictures. Anyhow, I am rambling again. Here is the link for all of you that are interested. The poem will follow!
Jen's Facebook Page
My Facebook Fan Page
Now for the actual poem. It is actually one of my favorites. I hope you enjoy and like I said, feel free to comment.
THE EFFECT OF A BROKEN HEART
In my head I feel an ache,
One that stems from a heart that breaks.
My mind seems to wonder what went wrong,
or why the pain lasts for so long.
Stabbing, Bleeding, Torn Apart...
A blackened mass remains-
Just one small piece of a broken heart
inside a shattered chest cave.
Now the pain increases, the Soul begins to die.
The body becomes weak, and the eyes start to cry.
A life now Crumbles, and falls to the floor.
All because of a love that lasts no more.
Much Love,
Jen
Oh and yeah, I noticed a lot of the members on here are getting Facebook pages. I am on Facebook as well. If anyone wants to befriend me on there as well, then I will include a link before the poem. I also have a fan page for the book on poetry that I have published. I will include a link for it as well. Sadly, at the moment I do not have many fans. Does that mean, I suck? I guess you guys can be the judge after I post the poem. It is by the way included in my book
As for Facebook itself, can be quite addicting. I am on there a lot more as a recent. It tends to load a little faster for me, than SG because it has less pictures. Anyhow, I am rambling again. Here is the link for all of you that are interested. The poem will follow!
Jen's Facebook Page
My Facebook Fan Page
Now for the actual poem. It is actually one of my favorites. I hope you enjoy and like I said, feel free to comment.
THE EFFECT OF A BROKEN HEART
In my head I feel an ache,
One that stems from a heart that breaks.
My mind seems to wonder what went wrong,
or why the pain lasts for so long.
Stabbing, Bleeding, Torn Apart...
A blackened mass remains-
Just one small piece of a broken heart
inside a shattered chest cave.
Now the pain increases, the Soul begins to die.
The body becomes weak, and the eyes start to cry.
A life now Crumbles, and falls to the floor.
All because of a love that lasts no more.
Much Love,
Jen
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And that poem is beautiful...hauntingly painful, but beautiful