dragunceol

ok. I tried to write annother Villanelle...but as much as I love the form it keeps eluding me. Maybe I'm just waiting for the right moment in my life to write about for it to fit my favorite poetic form. So instead of massacring it further, I chickened out and ended up with this.......



"Heaven is in Your Eyes"

Deep pools
Bring me down
Swirling I see
Your light

Tumbling
Falling hard
Never landing
Always falling

Freefalling
Feeling sensations
Being alive

Seeing a pulse
Belonging to your heart
Feeling myself dancing
To your rhythm

Being free
Being myself
Never wanting
Joy to end

Laughing
Loving pleasures
Loving you

Heaven is in your eyes