desmodius

here is another poem that i have written, this one is based on the characters from alice in wonderland... if i had a life this week. there might be something i could talk about...lol rent week sucks. if i didn't mismanage my meager moneys maybe i would have party money this week... but no.... i am broke and feeling very much in the mood of bored...my boy doesn't get off work till twelve so i have six hours of stagnation till i have something to do. i miss hanging with him. i guess i really don't show him the appreciation he deserves. he's my best freind. my bro really. we don't hang out near enough cause he's a night person and because i have a day job that starts at seven in the morn. we never hang out.... sadness...
well here is the hatter. let me know what yous all think of my writing okay? feed my vacant ego's with your oh so positive critiques. or tell me they suck. either way. it's nice to know...
the hatter
And the hatter turned to me with eyes,
of fires, turmoils and desires.
And said he wished that i could see,
that i was him and he was me.
while the drunken mouse and rabbit too,
bent o'er to sip their nothing stews.
both looked at me as if to say,
the sunbeams are quite dark today...
but the suns not out, i went to shout,
yet i sat and watched them mill about.
from chair to chair, and plate to plate,
they dined on air, yet ate and ate...

cool or spewl, you decide...