desmodius

i quit the story site i was on yesterday. it's funny how bad that place sucked. i wasted to much effort on that site. although i did learn some good grammar lessons from them. they hated the good stuff and loved the crap. i give you an example. the top writers of the site find the people that they feel might maybe knock them down off their peds and they gang up on you. giving you shitty ratings so you do not go anywhere. they make up the weirdest shit when they do it too. they correlated a part in one of my stories where a guy gets a bunch of splinters into his hand into something about jesus fucking christ...lol. fucking pathetic.
anyway... without too many grrr's. the last thing i posted was what clinched it for me... this was fucking funny. i posted the crappiest poem i have ever written. song lyrics that were vaguely like icp and based on greek mythos. they fucking loved it... imao. the one woman who was always giving me two or three stars gave me a five star, (which is a small jump from six stars which is best of the best and obviously hard to obtain, though i did get one...), on it... lol... this led me to believe that these people have no clue what the hell they are talking about. this was my comment back to her...- lol... omg... i am hoping that that confused her a lot.
anyway. like i said it wasn't a complete waste of my time. i did learn the few things that i was doing wrong with my writing and will strive to change them. I did not know what a sentence fragment was... yes... i am that dumb... kept seeing it pop up but never paid attention to it cause i didn't know... welp... now i do...lol and other things i was screwing up on. little things i know now were hurting me all along...
anyway. fit for your disapproval is the last thing that i posted on the site. it sucks. that's what it's intention was tobegin with...
anyway. loves to you all.

Lost in the labyrinth, looking for the Minotaur
Steal his fleece; send him home broke and sore-.
Ill pawn his axe; buy myself a nymph for the night.
Yeah shes a little small, but damn that shits tight.
You scream your spells. Ill grab my voodoo dolls,
You go to Olympus, Ill kick back within Shangri-la walls
Cause in the labyrinth of life, fucker I am the king,
And with my crew, I can do anything

When youre walking through the darkness,
Clutching at the candle light,
Forget all the bullshit, and fuck all the strife.
Therere only three things in this world to think of,
Just you, your blood, and the Homies you love.
In this darkness, the world might be frontin, just look around,
Cause this shit aint nothin.
Dont you cry, dont you shed no tear.
Cause there aint nothin to fear,
Cause you the baddest mother fucker here.

Looking for the Gorgon, cause she can turn me to stone,
And you know that bitch can go all night long, and then some.
Sure shes half snake, but that forked tongue is great,
And no matter what they tell you, those titties aint fake
So just sit back, shake and bake, a toke to take,
As I beat the nugs of all who play the fate.
And while we wait for the candle to light our way,
Well pray to the darkness that its here to stay.


When youre walking through the darkness,
Clutching at the candle light,
Forget all the bullshit, and fuck all the strife.
Therere only three things in this world to think of,
Just you, your blood, and the Homies you love.
In this darkness, the world might be frontin, just look around,
Cause this shit aint nothin.
Dont you cry, dont you shed no tear.
Cause there aint nothin to fear,
Cause you the baddest mother fucker here.


this is what they loved...lol

oh my blessed hell.... laters...lol