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Doubt, for me, was served up on a platter by my sensible shoed mother who had taught kindergarten for the past 10 years. Her parents had both taught elementary school for fifteen years and were now principals of matching urban impoverished elementary schools.
My childhood was an externally expanding shelf of age appropriate books, summer school classes and day trips to the Natural...
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Doubt, for me, was served up on a platter by my sensible shoed mother who had taught kindergarten for the past 10 years. Her parents had both taught elementary school for fifteen years and were now principals of matching urban impoverished elementary schools.
My childhood was an externally expanding shelf of age appropriate books, summer school classes and day trips to the Natural...
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so it's sad this doesn't suit you now.
and me fresh out of rope.
please ignore the slip, i never meant to sound like this.
so take me and break me and make me strong like you.
i'll be forever grateful to this and you.
it's only you, beautiful. or i don't want anyone.
if i can choose, it's only you.
fix me to a...
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and me fresh out of rope.
please ignore the slip, i never meant to sound like this.
so take me and break me and make me strong like you.
i'll be forever grateful to this and you.
it's only you, beautiful. or i don't want anyone.
if i can choose, it's only you.
fix me to a...
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johnnyxcliche:
you're one sneaky little girl...editing comments instead of adding new ones...I wish I could totally give myself to the right someone, but it seems she wants to be friends, which is a good thing, I just wish it could be better than that...oh well...anyway, if toneski backs out then I'mma gonna have to make the trip by myself and tickle you all the way back to Minnesota...boy, you're gonna be mad...but then you'll fall right into the protective arms of toneski and everything will be right with the world...wait a minute...that would suck...why would I do something like that? nevermind then, go about your usual business of being creeped out...I'll just sit here and think about what the hell I'm talking about...
freshlaundry:
Re:
Silly rabbit, of course I know it's a poem - and it's making fun of poems. That's called irony.
Anyway, it isn't written in my voice, it's written in the voice of a redneck - of which I am not.
cutie patootie.
you need to update your journal.
Silly rabbit, of course I know it's a poem - and it's making fun of poems. That's called irony.
Anyway, it isn't written in my voice, it's written in the voice of a redneck - of which I am not.
cutie patootie.
you need to update your journal.
monday morning's minutes, minutia & microtragedy:
peel eyes from eyelids. OPEN. (one in a bed built for two, bought for two, betrayed by one) 4:30 am says the wristwatch on the carpet. (he took the alarm clock when he left).
STRETCH. taut, clenched muscles scream protests between feet & knees, knees & hips. hips & shoulders. shoulders & elbows & hands. girl limbs mourn the...
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peel eyes from eyelids. OPEN. (one in a bed built for two, bought for two, betrayed by one) 4:30 am says the wristwatch on the carpet. (he took the alarm clock when he left).
STRETCH. taut, clenched muscles scream protests between feet & knees, knees & hips. hips & shoulders. shoulders & elbows & hands. girl limbs mourn the...
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hoisin:
I ain't ingnoring you sweetie 
you've not been on MSN
you've not been on MSN
thejuanupsman:
Guess I missed you. Actually I know I missed you.
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[Edited on Jun 09, 2004 3:03AM]
i rock ass. that is all. continue about your business....
my dumb fuck writing coming soon...whoopdefrickindooooo....let me remember how to read first. stay tuned.
all right folks, move it along, nothing to see here. (you do realize there's like vagina & stuff on this site right?)
my dumb fuck writing coming soon...whoopdefrickindooooo....let me remember how to read first. stay tuned.
all right folks, move it along, nothing to see here. (you do realize there's like vagina & stuff on this site right?)
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thejuanupsman:
you do rock, I have always thougt so., heh dumb fuck writing, I think that is the only dumb fuck thing you have ever written. I really don't want to move on. I think there is a lot to see here, But I guess I will if I have to...................
eurisko:
damn you figured it out. i was trying to hide the face that you rock. damn.
hello, quiet girl. london calling.
i'm still reading if you're still scrawling.
listening to stories your ghost voices whisper,
of pacific night/mornings & the air growing crisper.
draw a circle in the sand,
a portrait of things you can't understand.
i'll pretend not to notice black secrets in your chest,
slip you pretty sacrifices until you acquiesce.
i could be your dream, you could have...
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i'm still reading if you're still scrawling.
listening to stories your ghost voices whisper,
of pacific night/mornings & the air growing crisper.
draw a circle in the sand,
a portrait of things you can't understand.
i'll pretend not to notice black secrets in your chest,
slip you pretty sacrifices until you acquiesce.
i could be your dream, you could have...
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thejuanupsman:
sweet girl are you awake, I want to talk to you........
Take my hand and sing...
I am very happy and there are very few people I want to share that with more than you..
and none of them are around
Take my hand and sing...
I am very happy and there are very few people I want to share that with more than you..
and none of them are around
toneski:
still its a real good bet....the best is yet...to come.
delusion:
The saga of the shitty boot.
delusion:
All your image are belong to me.
fuck being sad. i want to be self destructively, irrationally content.
i don't want to nail my ivy league degree on the wall of my fucking corner office. i don't want to drive a bentley or live in brentwood. i don't need to be rich, famous or beautiful. i don't want to go to hollywood premieres or buy big tits to wear under expensive dresses....
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i don't want to nail my ivy league degree on the wall of my fucking corner office. i don't want to drive a bentley or live in brentwood. i don't need to be rich, famous or beautiful. i don't want to go to hollywood premieres or buy big tits to wear under expensive dresses....
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eurisko:
id say the things that make me happy are.... cheesy 80s music, movies, and getting comments in my journal. i also like days where i dont have to do any work and can just sit on my ass and do absolutely nothing, or when people see drawings ive done, and make positive comments about them.
applerecords1251:
wow, you got the life. Unless you can screw real good, where is the good side to going out with you? Just messing with ya cause yer pretty
Alf makes me happy. Cause who didn't love that show? And when he made the comeback getting work with that collect call thing, I was so happy, I thought they might bring the show back. I heard he is in rehab though with Scott Weiland.
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Alf makes me happy. Cause who didn't love that show? And when he made the comeback getting work with that collect call thing, I was so happy, I thought they might bring the show back. I heard he is in rehab though with Scott Weiland.
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my newest favorite muse....
"Take a stone from the beach and put it on my pocket to keep
Photo me in the roots of a tree lying on a bed of fallen leaves...
Make a circle on my hand and tell me all the things that make you sad
Searching for the words know that when you find them theyll be heard." ~p.j.
GIMME, GIMME,...
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"Take a stone from the beach and put it on my pocket to keep
Photo me in the roots of a tree lying on a bed of fallen leaves...
Make a circle on my hand and tell me all the things that make you sad
Searching for the words know that when you find them theyll be heard." ~p.j.
GIMME, GIMME,...
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pb:
=====> 
is teh glad for you.
i'm an affection whore too. too bad boys don't get to pander to that as often as girls. my skin tingles and my arms ache a lot. it was teh very very very nice this past weekend. sort of makes it worse.
-pb
is teh glad for you.
i'm an affection whore too. too bad boys don't get to pander to that as often as girls. my skin tingles and my arms ache a lot. it was teh very very very nice this past weekend. sort of makes it worse.
-pb
cellosoul:
Lines 8-13. I am so KVELLING, delusion... SO kvelling.
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Lola Montez
grace
tripping the life fantastic
on highwire of faith
wouldn't you know it
all these memories are coming back
and lovng methodologies
smile remnants spilling out from
underneath this couch
this bed
my divine heart
s
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Lola Montez
grace
tripping the life fantastic
on highwire of faith
wouldn't you know it
all these memories are coming back
and lovng methodologies
smile remnants spilling out from
underneath this couch
this bed
my divine heart
s
i have never felt less alive.
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cellosoul:
Thank goodness it's just a FEELING, then, huh?
As for metafiction...ah, yes...I remember it well. I took an interesting course from one of the (then, anyhoot) leading/first metafiction/self-reflexive theory-slingers (s gets misty-eyed).
Book nerds are go, D.
Take it light.
s
p.s., whoops--
so your SG moniker BTW makes a lot of sense/is a v. cool choice.
[Edited on Jun 02, 2004 8:13PM]
As for metafiction...ah, yes...I remember it well. I took an interesting course from one of the (then, anyhoot) leading/first metafiction/self-reflexive theory-slingers (s gets misty-eyed).
Book nerds are go, D.
Take it light.
s
p.s., whoops--
so your SG moniker BTW makes a lot of sense/is a v. cool choice.
[Edited on Jun 02, 2004 8:13PM]
freedonia:
i am sorry i was a bad new friend. i think you're beautiful (in every definition thereof). i look forward to finding you again in another part of the published world.
'bye.
'bye.
my newest favorite muse....
"Take a stone from the beach and put it on my pocket to keep
Photo me in the roots of a tree lying on a bed of fallen leaves...
Make a circle on my hand and tell me all the things that make you sad
Searching for the words know that when you find them theyll be heard." ~p.j.
GIMME, GIMME,...
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"Take a stone from the beach and put it on my pocket to keep
Photo me in the roots of a tree lying on a bed of fallen leaves...
Make a circle on my hand and tell me all the things that make you sad
Searching for the words know that when you find them theyll be heard." ~p.j.
GIMME, GIMME,...
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creative_slacker:
There you go... an oldy but goodie from moi.
There you go... an oldy but goodie from moi.
gonzoe:
well, i know it took forever for me to repost, but it's cause i suck like that. either way, thanks for the help. even if you end up not being able to give me much, it's the thought that counts. 
ok, so the story is pretty bizarre. it takes place in a post-apocalyptic "anywhere". there's no specific mention of any towns or landmarks so the reader can decide to put the story wherever they want it. the story is basically God getting sick of his job and quitting. he releases his bond with all the angels and other gods (from all major religions past and present) and they're all kind of roaming the Earth doing whatever they want.
i'm also writing the book as if it was written by an angel that watches mankind. so the whole story is written in present tense cause it's "being written as it's happening". also, since it's written roughly 30 years in the future, i'm taking the route of inventing my own words and making a glossary section.
the quickest way to describe it is probably:
1st dune book + 1st dark tower book + the history of religion = my book
ok, well that's about it. let me know if you have any other questions. again, thanks for your help. and good luck with the leg. being bed ridden blows goats.
ok, so the story is pretty bizarre. it takes place in a post-apocalyptic "anywhere". there's no specific mention of any towns or landmarks so the reader can decide to put the story wherever they want it. the story is basically God getting sick of his job and quitting. he releases his bond with all the angels and other gods (from all major religions past and present) and they're all kind of roaming the Earth doing whatever they want.
i'm also writing the book as if it was written by an angel that watches mankind. so the whole story is written in present tense cause it's "being written as it's happening". also, since it's written roughly 30 years in the future, i'm taking the route of inventing my own words and making a glossary section.
the quickest way to describe it is probably:
1st dune book + 1st dark tower book + the history of religion = my book
ok, well that's about it. let me know if you have any other questions. again, thanks for your help. and good luck with the leg. being bed ridden blows goats.
fuck having tact. i'm as subtle as a brick to the small of your back. manners and social graces are boring and overrated, just bullshit with a better outfit. i know my flaws and i'll wear them on my sleeve...better i spell out the bad things and have you discover the good on your own than tease you with my merits and disappoint you later....
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hoisin:
I say nothing!
Back at work today, so you're "safe"
Back at work today, so you're "safe"
pb:
aye, it is at that.
i sure wish i were staring another five hours or so of repose in her beautiful face right now.
sigh. you stay awake too much and i can't sleep enough. juxtapo------ bleh. that word is cliche.
-pb
i sure wish i were staring another five hours or so of repose in her beautiful face right now.
sigh. you stay awake too much and i can't sleep enough. juxtapo------ bleh. that word is cliche.
-pb
Fiction or not it's hella good.