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Swinging hips and open tongue kisses
Sipped, gulped, and slammed drinks
Shining bring lights and loud fast music
Slow dances and quick grinds
Always in the back of my head

I feel the moves,
I taste the drinks,
I see the light,
I hear the music,
A vision in my mind

Playing in the back seat
Partying with crazies
Picking the bars to hop
Passing...
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mamabunny:
smile
xxdistortmexx:
love Wow.
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Shimmer and fade

Where do good things go
Once theyve served their purpose?
Why cant they shimmer onward?
Must they fade to black?

I fucked things up royally
I should have stood fast to my old ways
If I hadnt grown I wouldnt ask these questions
And life, although sad, wouldnt be complicated

I didnt hate myself before
I just endured
A spectator and idiot...
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threestares:
i believe that sometimes when things seem to have faded to black it is because they are just too far away for us to see right now but they on their way around again.
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Poets Dream of Dreaming


Perfection sees with diamond eyes
Facets bend light to build a pleasing picture
And multiple hues glisten on an angels face.

This kaleidoscope shows me a world so beautiful
Compared to the unbent, unrefined, uninterrupted light of day
This view is a marvelous show of light and color but no shadow

No hidden lie lies in the world seen with diamond...
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threestares:
i just read your profile, how can a setter, as opposed to a pointer, pee on a dog while wrapped in cling film. doesn't that sound impossible to you?

okay, so i am being a bad ass because i can.
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Poets Dream of Dreaming


Perfection sees with diamond eyes
Facets bend light to build a pleasing picture
And multiple hues glisten on an angels face.

This kaleidoscope shows me a world so beautiful
Compared to the unbent, unrefined, uninterrupted light of day
This view is a marvelous show of light and color but no shadow

No hidden lie lies in the world seen with diamond...
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Black Tides in Winter

I lament the passing of our fleeting union.
Like a dark wave receding with a fantastic riptide,
Pulling my love steadily away,
As I pound my fists into the quicksand.
Pulling me steadily down.
Love dying in solution.
Life dying in dissolution.

I hate the black tides that delude the soul.
Watering it down with the countlessness of its wave.
Seemingly...
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