yeah, its another poem post
. This one was inspired by all those horrible, mushy Jesus love songs that, in actually, sound very sexual. i am not a religious man, so don't think this is serious. Then again, how could you?
Life With Jesus
I wake up to
your whisper in my ear;
you in your soft white robe.
My vision clears
in time to catch a whisp
of hair trailing down the hall.
A light clicks on.
I can hear the whir of your
blowdryer in the bathroom.
Since living with you
my life has seemed
a waking dream
and all that i can find
to prove it real
are long aubern hairs
left lying on the
cool blue tiles
of my bathroom floor.
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P.S.- its "supposed to" sound all mushy.
. This one was inspired by all those horrible, mushy Jesus love songs that, in actually, sound very sexual. i am not a religious man, so don't think this is serious. Then again, how could you?
Life With Jesus
I wake up to
your whisper in my ear;
you in your soft white robe.
My vision clears
in time to catch a whisp
of hair trailing down the hall.
A light clicks on.
I can hear the whir of your
blowdryer in the bathroom.
Since living with you
my life has seemed
a waking dream
and all that i can find
to prove it real
are long aubern hairs
left lying on the
cool blue tiles
of my bathroom floor.
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P.S.- its "supposed to" sound all mushy.
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Nice poem! I went to catholic school, so I know all about sappy "Jesus loves me" songs. Catholic school didn't do much for me, but it certainly gave me even more reasons for not being catholic.
As for being far away, you need to come to Boston 'cause we have the best Irish punk rock!
I figured if I used the old cynicminded bait, everyone would immediately drop everything and go help me look for a job.
I meant to compliment you on your poem. Me likey.
On a side note, do you realize that the BBQ is in 10 days?? That's so awesome. I can't wait to see ya again!
Imagine all the goodness...Annabelle, Anika, graciebaby, Niamh, caddi56, SuperScott---LOTS OF OC LAMENESS!
Maybe that sensual pillowfight will happen.
By the way, have you read about the ass-grabbing ghost in my journal?? Hahaha.
[Edited on Jun 08, 2004 3:43PM]