cyanide81

Im still working on my book/webcomic with my friend. i started working on rough drafts of the pages. i've already got the storyboards done for the first part, but now its time to do some real work.

here is the rough draft of the second page (i'm holding off on the first because i need to go into the city and take some reference photos). please let me know what you think:

ps: its a large image file

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/brokendays/spiral/page2rough.jpg keep in mind that its still a rough draft, i'll be making changes, shading it, and cleaning it up a lot. and i might try and do colors... but im not sure yet. i might just leave the inside pages b&w until i feel more confident in my coloring skills

also, if anyone has myspace, come add us to your buddy list
http://www.myspace.com/brokendaysmedia (this is still under construction)