In moments of weakness
your nipples edge me into an
uncertain and shaky funk.
Not as a whole; representing certain fragments,
not the image of the nipples, not the nipples, but
the ghost of the nipples,
yes, in weak moments
before a dream,
or when I am washing my hands,
or brushing my teeth, or
masturbating, in
moments of hamburger reverie,
the ghost of your...
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your nipples edge me into an
uncertain and shaky funk.
Not as a whole; representing certain fragments,
not the image of the nipples, not the nipples, but
the ghost of the nipples,
yes, in weak moments
before a dream,
or when I am washing my hands,
or brushing my teeth, or
masturbating, in
moments of hamburger reverie,
the ghost of your...
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A distinct odor that holds in time and space.
A revelation neither surprising or sublime.
The main house, the Cedar House, Mom-Moos.
I have a lot of dreams about this place.
Cedar, dust and biscuits. Once, Hascues
aftershave.
Bingo, chips.
Now, odor more
like polyester and lemon cedar.
And the cedar has eyes.
Returning with reoccurring visions.
Outside, the drainage ditch is a bottomless pit,...
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A revelation neither surprising or sublime.
The main house, the Cedar House, Mom-Moos.
I have a lot of dreams about this place.
Cedar, dust and biscuits. Once, Hascues
aftershave.
Bingo, chips.
Now, odor more
like polyester and lemon cedar.
And the cedar has eyes.
Returning with reoccurring visions.
Outside, the drainage ditch is a bottomless pit,...
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moondaddy:
I love that.. makes me want to write about my grandparents' old house in New Jersey.
"Cedar, dust and biscuits." You come up some of the greatest stand-alone imagistic lines.
I'll find something of mine to post--thanks for asking, man. I haven't been writing at all lately... been too stressed out. But I think feel the bug sneaking up on me again, finally.
"Cedar, dust and biscuits." You come up some of the greatest stand-alone imagistic lines.
I'll find something of mine to post--thanks for asking, man. I haven't been writing at all lately... been too stressed out. But I think feel the bug sneaking up on me again, finally.
relethed:
greetings to the resident avant garde poet 
hope all is well with you in s.g. land, and the married world. how are school plans proceeding?
sorry i haven't been around...my new excuse is my internet connection. i used to get free service thru school, but, of course, at the end of spring term that went kaput. which means i've had no net access for a month. *sigh*
i have personally paved 2/3 of the road to hell.....
but i haven't forgotten about you; hope to talk to you more soon.
hope all is well with you in s.g. land, and the married world. how are school plans proceeding?
sorry i haven't been around...my new excuse is my internet connection. i used to get free service thru school, but, of course, at the end of spring term that went kaput. which means i've had no net access for a month. *sigh*
i have personally paved 2/3 of the road to hell.....
but i haven't forgotten about you; hope to talk to you more soon.
Should we carry in the cooler, are you going to want a drink?
I think we are going to need more ice, this
is all water/ is all liquefied mush.
The parking lot/ an ominous field.
The trees are alive and cannot move fast enough.
Room away from the traffic, on ground level, so you can go through the screen.
Chattering. This is no game....
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I think we are going to need more ice, this
is all water/ is all liquefied mush.
The parking lot/ an ominous field.
The trees are alive and cannot move fast enough.
Room away from the traffic, on ground level, so you can go through the screen.
Chattering. This is no game....
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rickroyal:
I'm not entirely sure I like how close the "dying" and "destroyed" are placed. Strange resonance.
The only reason I have a passing like for "Born in the USA" is because of 2 Live Crew's "Banned In the USA," which is a pretty good song. Springsteen is one of those artist who I can't understand how they became famous, as I can't name more than three songs by him (did he do "Dancer in the Dark"?). So, yeah, two Jersey boys who dislike the Boss. Strange.
The only reason I have a passing like for "Born in the USA" is because of 2 Live Crew's "Banned In the USA," which is a pretty good song. Springsteen is one of those artist who I can't understand how they became famous, as I can't name more than three songs by him (did he do "Dancer in the Dark"?). So, yeah, two Jersey boys who dislike the Boss. Strange.
lizfitts:
Yay for puppies!! Got any pics yet??
TO ASSOCIATE DISPLACEMENT.
The guy wiping the tables eyes up the waitress, he
is asking her if she works tomorrow, soon he will ask her out,
they are teaming up to clean the table,
putting the knives in their little white cups, he eyes
her ass. TO PERCEIVE ONLY FRAGMENTS, TO PERCEIVE
A WHOLE FROM THE PIECE.
THOSE NAILS, my
bacon is fatty, my
home...
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The guy wiping the tables eyes up the waitress, he
is asking her if she works tomorrow, soon he will ask her out,
they are teaming up to clean the table,
putting the knives in their little white cups, he eyes
her ass. TO PERCEIVE ONLY FRAGMENTS, TO PERCEIVE
A WHOLE FROM THE PIECE.
THOSE NAILS, my
bacon is fatty, my
home...
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moondaddy:
I like that... the dodgy implications of perceving "a whole from the piece." The life of the obsessive compulsive must be like that all the frickin time. I know I've been there all too often myself.
"Creating during destruction"... is that like a big bang sorta thing? Or a reference to the deconstruction that's going on in the poem?
"Creating during destruction"... is that like a big bang sorta thing? Or a reference to the deconstruction that's going on in the poem?
zenhell:
15% gratuity
That savage
is staring at me, but
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
the hairy fiend with the baseball cap, he
is staring at me, but he
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
and that old man with stringy hair
and no teeth, rambling past me
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
he also, he is my executioner.
THE PERSONA CAN BE KILLED. WATCH.
In the last few...
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is staring at me, but
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
the hairy fiend with the baseball cap, he
is staring at me, but he
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
and that old man with stringy hair
and no teeth, rambling past me
CANNOT BE BUT INTO SPACE
he also, he is my executioner.
THE PERSONA CAN BE KILLED. WATCH.
In the last few...
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xxanastasiaxx:
Yep..it's the old Asbury Park, NJ Palace..with the picture of Tillie. I remember going there as a kid..
trilobyte:
kind words indeed, thank you sir!
trilo
trilo TO INDICATE TIME BY OPINION,
she takes so long.
These two men have been waiting on those buckets,
voyeurs obsessed with automobiles.
WOMEN CANNOT BE GAUGED WITH CLOCKS OR TAPES.
In the garage
for cars like ours.
ADDRESSING THE POEM, NOT THE MEN.
Pull up further please.
Your best gasoline?
AUTOMOBILES ARE NOT WOMEN.
MECHANICS CAN RAPE WOMEN BUT NOT AUTOMOBILES.
His pruny fingers will...
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she takes so long.
These two men have been waiting on those buckets,
voyeurs obsessed with automobiles.
WOMEN CANNOT BE GAUGED WITH CLOCKS OR TAPES.
In the garage
for cars like ours.
ADDRESSING THE POEM, NOT THE MEN.
Pull up further please.
Your best gasoline?
AUTOMOBILES ARE NOT WOMEN.
MECHANICS CAN RAPE WOMEN BUT NOT AUTOMOBILES.
His pruny fingers will...
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rexphantom:
Hulk review is GO.
I was just thinking about all the rad people on this site and about how I'd like to spend some more time writing here. So we'll see how that works out.
I was just thinking about all the rad people on this site and about how I'd like to spend some more time writing here. So we'll see how that works out.
ingrid:
I would LOVE to hear about the collaborative art project!!! Please do e-mail me about it!
Narrow spectrums of human vision-
the ability to perceive sunlight simultaneously
with olfactory perception -
imagine only color corona, the only color that be;
do not forget ultraviolet radiation)
this too colors your scene, only by exposing
delicate spots of spectrum
in 1991,
7 in the morning,
sun clicking still.
In the living room
tocking,
poetry by folded napkin,
I wait
at
breakfast table.
the ability to perceive sunlight simultaneously
with olfactory perception -
imagine only color corona, the only color that be;
do not forget ultraviolet radiation)
this too colors your scene, only by exposing
delicate spots of spectrum
in 1991,
7 in the morning,
sun clicking still.
In the living room
tocking,
poetry by folded napkin,
I wait
at
breakfast table.
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evel:
hi stranger. missed you....
roxxee:
Hello again! Btw- that's lovely.
Btw- that's lovely.ECHINODERM
SMASH THIS ROOM AS AN ISLAND,
picture everything in
terms of husbands and wives, absolutes and nothings. Get away
from her, you crawling fiend! She has a right
to grin. Well,
dry me up and crush my arms. If you
would toss this guy off the plank >
if I could sail you through time and space. Snappy
looking dish. I can get
new...
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SMASH THIS ROOM AS AN ISLAND,
picture everything in
terms of husbands and wives, absolutes and nothings. Get away
from her, you crawling fiend! She has a right
to grin. Well,
dry me up and crush my arms. If you
would toss this guy off the plank >
if I could sail you through time and space. Snappy
looking dish. I can get
new...
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Some curtains? Black sheets; youre squeezing the bun.
Hair. A bead of sweat drops on fresh cut bread.
An uncompleted word, a fold out bed.
Hairy feet wrapped in a blanket. White crumbs?
The phone ring. You bite the confection.
An uncompleted scarf, unraveled lines, red
yarns, tangled stories, crust sprinkling the bed.
The meter fails here. (Bladder infection.)
Fragments of letters, aching, stinging piss,...
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Hair. A bead of sweat drops on fresh cut bread.
An uncompleted word, a fold out bed.
Hairy feet wrapped in a blanket. White crumbs?
The phone ring. You bite the confection.
An uncompleted scarf, unraveled lines, red
yarns, tangled stories, crust sprinkling the bed.
The meter fails here. (Bladder infection.)
Fragments of letters, aching, stinging piss,...
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rumpusparable:
hiya, came by & looked at your stuff out of curiosity from the BBW group.
very nice. i'm especially partial to the lime & lemon fruit floors, but they all show a very good eye. beautiful!
very nice. i'm especially partial to the lime & lemon fruit floors, but they all show a very good eye. beautiful!
mitten:
hi
you can see what 1920 clothes looks like on a model. in fact you get to see what they look like on the owner! go to bliss's set. she's wearing the boxing gloves set and the tommy guns set in some of the pics.
you can see what 1920 clothes looks like on a model. in fact you get to see what they look like on the owner! go to bliss's set. she's wearing the boxing gloves set and the tommy guns set in some of the pics.
ASSOCIATION IS NOT CAUSATION (part 1)
3 Hours, pale blue porticos into possibilities.
This section introduces conditional probabilities.
Ocean pressure pounds rocks into sand.
At which point a puzzle appears.
6 years ago, your phone number floats in an oaken desk drawer.
I called it. I hardly called it. I didnt call it at all.
After 6 years, theres evidence of slippage.
The human variable...
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3 Hours, pale blue porticos into possibilities.
This section introduces conditional probabilities.
Ocean pressure pounds rocks into sand.
At which point a puzzle appears.
6 years ago, your phone number floats in an oaken desk drawer.
I called it. I hardly called it. I didnt call it at all.
After 6 years, theres evidence of slippage.
The human variable...
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nadine:
it's green!!! green i tell you!! 
look at the long bit infront of my face...starts blue, goes wierd green colour! dam it!! oh well......i'll smile anyways...
look at the long bit infront of my face...starts blue, goes wierd green colour! dam it!! oh well......i'll smile anyways...
bionicfemme:
I think I gained 30 pounds in 15 seconds...it's from ordering pizza late at night all the time and drinking so many damn femmy cocktails. 
I am doing much better now.
How have you been?
xo