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Thursday Apr 08, 2010

Apr 8, 2010
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I used to write a lot of poetry but quit sometime ago. As of late I have had trouble expressing my feelings and learning to let things go. So last night I decided maybe it is time to try some simple, ugly poetry.

Keep in mind this is a small piece of something that is two full pages and growing.

The title is "Broken" and here is a sample:

"...

The anger damages my soul,
For I haven't learned to let it go.

There is no retribution,
I can only imagine a bad solution.

I wonder how my sins will be judged,
Even if they are only portrayed in my mind.

...

Should my body and soul separate,
I pray for God's embrace.

But God will not accept a selfish end,
So I am left with a damned lonely departure.

There are no words that can be said,
To remove the torture from my head.

...

I beg your help to find a middle ground,
Before it's too late for us to rebound.
..."

It's a work in-progress and needs a lot of refinement. Be kind and remember I haven't written a poem in probably 10 years! eeek

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