burstandbloom

I liked your poem, its nice reading poety that doesnt concern how crappy someones day is. There is a great site if you are up to it, allready started thats been a long for a good while that moved to a new forrum so, there isn't as many posts as before, but there are a good deal more than it first started.

All the "I hate my parents" jr poets have seemed to been scared off the site. This site has some great published writers, and writers who know their stuff... so you will get crit... from reading your work, you wont get bashed the way some people do, people who right rock-lyric poems...

But just to add the caveat, expect some crit.

http://www.plagiarist.com/

click on Forrum, or whatever, and you can read the forrum, and my explanation of Kitty at the top too... I post on there as my pen name "mccarthy"...

Oh yes, do you write and have gals come up to you and say 'what are you writing sweetie? do you want a dance?" that seems like a interesting environment to write. Bukowski would probably have dug it.

Sounds good. I have heard about fridge but I keep forgetting to pick up something. Maybe at the show. But yeah, we will hook up.