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Saturday Sep 10, 2005

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monk's wheel

It became a burden to her thoughts,
Everyone arrested in their own target.
No, I agree, I said. What's the
Point of articulation if summary
Is merely hit and draw. Draw
And hit, hit. Sometimes
We fight and I end up swinging
From a tire on a chain behind
The walled assumptions of a monastary.
Do you have to sit there studying
She asks. I'm not, I'm turning
Like a world, now I'm twisting
Sick like a memory of being
Sick. Which is nothing like
The real thing, I thought. I taught.


from 'undersamesky'

*

"The world's furious song flows through my costume"

-Ted Berrigan


y:
"Come here Stay" - that's funny biggrin I'm not sure I understand the analogy though; but I'll figure it out eventually.

As to your poem, I have these things to say - 1. I like monks. 2. Communication is very difficult. and 3. What's "undersamesky"?

T
Sep 11, 2005
luxdivon:
i appreciate your thoughts, and your poems(i like the one you posted) i've been away since i havent had internet. i'm oftentimes not a good friend, and respond less than i should. nontheless i still hope you are well, and keep writing. smile
Sep 11, 2005

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