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Monday Dec 05, 2005

Dec 5, 2005
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fuck me (part 27)

Flies tattooed on dead flowers.

I am curious. That is

To say an odd
Child with no legs

Clinging to a leash. "Crunch"

The diary says, a
Gravel on red earth. Hunch

My mind says, my

Back

And forth
Across

The prism

Of adversity.

(It's old

To be tired, it's

Young. Its

Tied to my
Wrist, angel's

Applause

Which is siren

To elder devils, which

Is silence, which

Is rebellion

In reverse. You

Took my pulse

Now give it back.

Dead flies tattooed on flowers

How does the ending

And the evening

Erupt?)


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huck:
i couldn't agree more, my good man

you get an A

FYI i took that quote from a paragraph in Bukowski On Bukowski in which dhe enounces the bard quite reasonably, but i thought "Shakespeare is shit" has a nice ring to it biggrin
Dec 7, 2005
huck:
yeah, i think it's a "keeper". smile

i saw this guy on the bus on the way to work and his face was quite horribly damaged; i suspect he was indeed in a fire. what got me though was that he seemed confident. he had a nice chat with the driver, then got off n went on his way.

it's always a bit of a wake-up call when you see a deformity and recoil internally but then realise the person is just getting on with it. it's very humbling, hence i wrote the piece as a child might, instead of pontificating for 40 lines. no thoughts on a title yet, though. any ideas?
Dec 7, 2005

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