What can I do
What can I do
The girl I love's so far away
Can't get a job got bills to pay
I had some money but it's been spent
I need some help that's heaven sent
Well God musta done forgotten me
Cause I got no help that I can see
What can I do
What can I do
When she just wont get on outa' my mind
Find myself thinkin' bout her all the time
I'm stuck in a rut it ain't no joke
Livin' my life for pool and smoke
Up all night with no tomorrow
And I sleep away the pain and sorrow
What can I do
What can I do
No I just can't win though I try with all of my might
I ain't got no cash, no love, no nothin' in sight
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It's a work in progress. If you want to comment, I would appreciate it - but I'm not a songwriter... so don't put me down if you don't like it, or tell me it's great just to appease me. For the music behind it, think Buddy Holly / Young Elvis.
What can I do
The girl I love's so far away
Can't get a job got bills to pay
I had some money but it's been spent
I need some help that's heaven sent
Well God musta done forgotten me
Cause I got no help that I can see
What can I do
What can I do
When she just wont get on outa' my mind
Find myself thinkin' bout her all the time
I'm stuck in a rut it ain't no joke
Livin' my life for pool and smoke
Up all night with no tomorrow
And I sleep away the pain and sorrow
What can I do
What can I do
No I just can't win though I try with all of my might
I ain't got no cash, no love, no nothin' in sight
-
It's a work in progress. If you want to comment, I would appreciate it - but I'm not a songwriter... so don't put me down if you don't like it, or tell me it's great just to appease me. For the music behind it, think Buddy Holly / Young Elvis.
instarsia:
i'd love it if ytou serenade me with it 

bcoskin:
It's nothing special. Just a tired little song, but thank you just the same.