aramaia

Thought Id post a little something for you guy on here. I was up until about three this morning writing, and thought I'd share what came out. It's not much, just a little drafting. If you guys have any comments or critiques go ahead and toss 'em at me. It's okay, I'm a keen dodgeball player, so don't worry about hitting me, I'll probably just dodge. LOL!

I have found Eden
In your eyes, in your skin.
In your arms
I have found the beginning of all
As I see you, naked and pale below me
Your eyes hold the ocean
Our distance closes and I feel you
Skin of my skin and we are one.

I have found Eden in your garden
Beneath your foundation;
As my hand slides between your legs
And you shiver under my touch
Your body is smooth against mine
And wet, like life
For you are my Eve
And I'm addicted to the taste of your fruit
On my sinning lips
And from your tree
I gain the knowledge of good and evil.

I feel you become so soft below me
As I kiss the tender parts of you
Your cheeks flush red
As you rise to meet my lips
And the angels cry in jealousy
At the closeness of our two souls.
I have found Eden
As we melt into a primal song
Sung for centuries, risen again in us