allycat_13

Gonna be all Emo and share a poem with you all. I once again opened my mouth without thinking yesterday and sadly caused a friend to be angry with me. It sucks, I value this friendship. I didn't think what I was saying was wrong, but I hurt the persons feelings and insulted his ego I think. I don't know where we stand or where we will go from here.

So here goes and any feedback will be helpful about the poem. You know how much I love to hear what you Guy's & Doll's think about my writing.
Thanks!

6-29-06
Laughter hides the Pain inside
Rage shows often and many
wonder why.........
I will answer any questions
you have so please go ahead
and ask of me what you will
I have a past that is dark, but
that is also filled with light
Over the years my mind has
grown, but mistakes are made still
Can I not be accepted for who I am?
Am I too much to handle?
I doubt very much that I will find
someone to call my own who
will stay long enough to take my shit
This mind is too over bearing and no
one can truly understand what
dwells inside
My inner demons cannot be
defeated nor overcome