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Hallo again lovelies.

So I have rewritten my second play David's Gods yet again. This time I wouldn't mind some feedback, especially from anyone who read it the first time. Also from anyone who hasn't seen it at all. I'd love some precise and detailed comment and critique, though any response is welcome.

The play is 5-10 pages longer than it was a few years ago. I won't post it yet, cause I'm curious first how many of you would be interested in perusing a work that is now, in 12 point font, nearly 50 pages long. I could post it here, or send it to you in some other method if you prefer not reading long tracts in SG blogs.
I also have the notion of being wary of plagiarism. Not that my stuff is all that hot, but I figure this is the best, more professional piece I've written, and I've yet to find another play that tackles this subject the same way, so posting it fairly anonymously in semi-public forums is not necessarily the wisest of moves. At the same time, feedback is the best way I know at this point to refine this play to better reflect my intentions, or shift those intentions slightly.

So, you wanna see my play? (And let me know if you read it already.)