Wednesday Dec 07, 2005

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All I need is one.

Falling

I will fall
Fall until the end
Dont catch me
I will fall

Any distance between
I will follow
Dont try to stop me
I will go

Risk I will take
Chances are many
Dont take this from me
I will gamble

If you are her
I will fall
I will pray .
That death is what stops my fall

You will know
It was you
That I loved
Till my last breathe

ash:
Well Im assuming that because you're occupation says "poet" that you wrote that up there *points up*. Unfortunately I have no comment for you on how I feel abt it (Im really not into poetry) but thanks for sharing anyways smile It takes guts to put yourself and your work out in the open like that
ash:
well youre wlecome, but I didnt think my comment was THAT nice wink I wish I couldve intepretted or given u constructive critisism or something worthwhile. *shrug*

aaah well smile Take care hun

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