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Someway somehow someday I will steal myself away from the owners from the owners of my body and my mind. But slowly surely slowly sets of canine teeth still hold me writ in paper pressed in badges spoke in lies. Someone Someday might help me but as for now it's too unhealthy for the lovely lover ladies to arrive. Those smart enough to know me...
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xxun:
Those are the people you make sure to kick the back of their seats tongue
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Final draft icluding logo
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silentlywaiting:
Yes, but is it really Anonymous?
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Un Prophte (A Prophet)

The IMDB summary:

SPOILERS! (Click to view)

Nineteen year-old Franco-Arab Malik El Djebena is just starting his six year prison sentence in Brcourt. Although he has spent the better part of his life in juvenile detention, this stint is his first in an adult prison. Beyond the division of Corsicans and Muslims in the prison (the Corsicans who with their guard...
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silentlywaiting:
This film looks excellent. I will probably have to wait till DVD to get it but it is now on my list.

As to the Boondock Saints 2 rant, I couldn't find it on IMDB quotes. I had to transcribe the thing myself. I'll be using it as a Monologue audition piece for some shows soon.

I actually loved Boondock Saints 2. I felt that it was slow at times, and the flashback format of the backstory got a little irritating, but damn if Troy Duffy doesn't still write some seriously funny dialogue.

Romeo: "Hey, you don't know me... do these make me look gay?"

Arms Dealer: "You look like you might've seen one up close."

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Not my best work, by far.

silentlywaiting:
First let me say that coming from a layman, all of my comments may be worthless. I think it was shot very well, very clean and smooth transitions. The audio synced seamlessly so I can't see any technical problems with it. The real problem with it are the performances of the two sub-humans that keep babbling in every scene.

Since you are a talented writer, can I assume you didn't write the script?

"Here we pay honor... to the medal of honor." Wow. The delivery made it worse.

All in all I would say usable in your portfolio. From a tech aspect it is well shot and edited. The rest of it I would say you had no control over. Good work.
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Sometimes making a shitty non-profit video for a non-profit you don't particularly believe in with footage you're not overly proud of can be a little disheartening. Marlowe is bringing over some photos tomorrow that I can hopefully incorporate to improve the pace and quality of the overall piece. The worst part is I know I can do better at this, and have done better given...
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silentlywaiting:
Criticizing anyone doesn't usually go over well no matter what the industry. I just checked out their web site... so, yeah. Some of the exhibits look very legit and well founded. Others look like fluff pieces that any local organization across the U.S. could put together with a minimum of time and effort. It does have a very business like feel to it. Is what you are shooting going to be used to promote the facility on tv or the web or is it going to be used for presentations to gather investors? I hope that it will come out solid enough so that you can use it in your portfolio.
silentlywaiting:
Public television fodder. That is by far my favorite new derogatory phrase for the week. The only redeeming quality PBS ever had was that they would show Red Dwarf and Monty Python reruns every once in a blue moon. Let me know when the video is available on the web, I would dig checking it out. And yes, you are terrifying critical and self deprecating so I am sure it will be quite good. Especially to a visual layman such as myself.
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More shit for people with taste to avoid.



There are no Good Men

Sundays spent in
White rooms with
Black shadows
Ghouls
Sitting in golden pews
Listening to the thunder
And hiss
Of the Holy sinner
Here
There are no Good Men

Business hours
In Walnut
Coffin offices with
Wallpaper lined with money
Thick
Downy chairs to pad
Fat asses and
Thick skulls
Here where...
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silentlywaiting:
Damn you for writing my current opinion of the world before I got around to it. As usual, your self deprecation does not become your work. This is the caricature of the world that films like Sin City present, mixed with a healthy dose of reality, then slapped on paper for the rest of us to realize. I have nothing negative to say. Well done sir.
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My christ lady gaga fucking blows. I mean she blows HARD. Her cadence is even worse than mine on a bad day with too many shots of gin. Thank god she's relegated to people without taste in music or poetry. Fashion whores, to be specific. I feel embarrassed having even been exposed to her. ugh... so bad
setsuka:
Though I laugh at her style and her music is bad, I find it catchy and I can't help but dance around to it...stoned or not.
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My body floated without a spine
Just a brain
a heart
two arms and
two legs nestled about a pile of
guts and blood and balls and
thin skin

I knew how to love
to shit to learn to
fuck to
speak
but hovered
never understanding
how to stand up
and be brave
to put those fists
brains, shit and words
to good use
balls...
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Re-iterating the fact that I hate 90% of people over fifty. Survival is not what it once was. Neither are ticket prices, technology, or immigration policies. Some lady made nasty faces at me for not agreeing with her that interracial couples are disgusting and should be locked away in zoos as bad examples. I wanted to break her gristly little fingers and make out with...
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A lot of people (and by this I mean an estimated 90% of the people I know in addition to non-respected acquaintances) have encouraged me to use the obvious facilities which I have access to in order to defeat drug tests. On the other hand, I made a promise to two people in my family that I would not. This isn't really so much a...
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Dollars dollars dollars and obedience. Dollars and dolere, money and pain. Funny how things go together. So soak soak soak it up su su sudio because the stutter is something I don't need. Obedience, however, I give only to myself, my ideals and those I care for. Soon within the year I will be free.