I may not be ready for love
but oh, I do know who you are!
Every potential high has potential pain
and to you I was once your slave.
My beauty rest was in the clouds,
against you I lain in.
One plus one did not equal two,
because there was no equation.
X equals Y, it was just right.
We were the same because...
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but oh, I do know who you are!
Every potential high has potential pain
and to you I was once your slave.
My beauty rest was in the clouds,
against you I lain in.
One plus one did not equal two,
because there was no equation.
X equals Y, it was just right.
We were the same because...
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Housing with naked windows
the people are all looking, but all passing by.
See the blood on the kitchen counter,
stains from tainted love on bed sheets,
and the ghost of the baby that was never born.
Sitting a slave to the television,
the wine bottle is half empty,
it will never fill again.
Her soul is drunk and easy,
like every time she numbingly...
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the people are all looking, but all passing by.
See the blood on the kitchen counter,
stains from tainted love on bed sheets,
and the ghost of the baby that was never born.
Sitting a slave to the television,
the wine bottle is half empty,
it will never fill again.
Her soul is drunk and easy,
like every time she numbingly...
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ritavonneurosis:
Thanks for your friend request!
abstrectchrist:
this is written well as far as expression, it's aesthetics need work however, this needs to be split into stanzas to keep from imagery overload, it derails in flow at line 18(this can be simply fixed by moving portions down to form their own line or mix with others), you could make use of semicolons, the quote needs a comma before the unquote punctuation and there's a choice of expression in line 15 that is self explanatory and thus can be cleaned up a bit by merely changing its wording as simple as it already is.
again, sorry, it's the only way i know to examine poetry.
lol where's the names for your poems anyways?
again, sorry, it's the only way i know to examine poetry.
lol where's the names for your poems anyways?
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kelpie_:
nicki minaj is delishhhh
grandkai94:
Agreed, girl from Trinidad
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mufan86:
Stunning
maible:
If i may say, you're adorable. 
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mufan86:
Seems to me somebody needs a cuddle buddy you look amazing sweetie and good luck with your sets.
you look amazing sweetie and good luck with your sets.
kevin82:
So Sexy...
</3
and yes, that is the only thing I feel.
and yes, that is the only thing I feel.
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vayda:
I am thankful for your concern. And @illbethe_hyena I hope things look up for you also. See it as an opportunity to explore what's inside of you. Sometimes loneliness is the best way to figure your life out.
drewmellow:
A broken heart is awful. I am sorry and hope you find something to fill your heart soon and chase away that loneliness.
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vayda:
GOOD
or else i would have to sick my sheep stuffed animals on that wolf bitch
or else i would have to sick my sheep stuffed animals on that wolf bitch
richard_:
Easy there young trigga... lol 
He's a nice wolf. Kinda scary lookin, but sweet as candy pie. 
He's a nice wolf. Kinda scary lookin, but sweet as candy pie. 
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vayda:
Thanks I appreciate that, and yeah I agree hahaha. Too much booty in a row :p
I'll keep that in mind!
I'll keep that in mind!
martyn:
Congreatz to your debut set. You have such an cute smile an your cheek piercings are hot.
I'm so happy that this is finally happening, I love Suicide Girls. Their alternative beauty has always inspired me to embrace being my own individual and pursuing my passions, no matter how "relevant" they may have seemed to my family and peers. Throughout high school I would talk to one of my best friends about how hott it would be to be a SG. Finally...
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josh2theutothea:
Good luck with your set and keep writing.
abstrectchrist:
you were beautiful in your set by the way and nice write, could feel the emotion put into it.
although one recommendation since I'm used to getting and giving constructive criticism and all:
The "the" at the end of line 12 should move to the beginning of line 13 if you want to keep it flowing properly.