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As requested, here is the first chapter in my book.
Fall From Grace
by Me
For Jessica
Preface
These days are closing in,
The end has become apparent,
We're only here for so long.
Will anyone remember my name,
When time has washed away the dust of our ashes,
When my head rests in a velvet lined casket?
What's out there?
What is my eternal...
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Fall From Grace
by Me
For Jessica
Preface
These days are closing in,
The end has become apparent,
We're only here for so long.
Will anyone remember my name,
When time has washed away the dust of our ashes,
When my head rests in a velvet lined casket?
What's out there?
What is my eternal...
Read More
frolic:
you're a fantastic writer, lady.
and cute to boot
and cute to boot
eyeambaldman:
Very interesting that you chose a song from Atreyu as your intro...
I saw no real errors here because I was captivated by your style. I really like 1st person and the emotion conveyed in this piece was well done. The last bit of dialogue really stuck out as a sort of cliffhanger (good!).
Here's to hoping you post the rest as you get through the revision. Good luck!
I saw no real errors here because I was captivated by your style. I really like 1st person and the emotion conveyed in this piece was well done. The last bit of dialogue really stuck out as a sort of cliffhanger (good!).
Here's to hoping you post the rest as you get through the revision. Good luck!
Down.
Humpty dumpty sat on a wall
Humpty dumpty had a great fall
But why was Humpty on that fucking wall?
All the king's horses and all the king's men
The lover, the fighter, the family of ten
They just couldn't put Humpty back together again
London Bridge Is falling down,
Falling down, Falling down.
London Bridge Is falling down,
My fair lady.
London Bridges...
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Humpty dumpty sat on a wall
Humpty dumpty had a great fall
But why was Humpty on that fucking wall?
All the king's horses and all the king's men
The lover, the fighter, the family of ten
They just couldn't put Humpty back together again
London Bridge Is falling down,
Falling down, Falling down.
London Bridge Is falling down,
My fair lady.
London Bridges...
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daleth:
Well that's nice should we cheek on you med updates lol its was very interesting I liked it a lot take care 
ilooklikesatan:
I've always found the origin of children's songs/tales interesting. I love how Grimm fairytales are really not children's stories when originally written, yet we've modified them to be told as such.
In honor of my nudie picture debut, here is a poem I wrote in my Philosophy of Yoga class to keep myself from falling asleep (not that the class is boring, I just have a hard time staying awake if I sit still too long).
This Is My Body
This is my body-
Scars, bruises, dimples, and all
I am unique because of my flaws....
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This Is My Body
This is my body-
Scars, bruises, dimples, and all
I am unique because of my flaws....
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kamuela:
That is beautuful.
jackedupkid7:
wait wait wait, brains and beauty what a total package. there should be more of you.
when I feed the cat it looks at me like " see, I must be a god... "