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Goodbye cruel world I'm leaving you today smile
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This one aint relevant cos it is summer- I dug it up the other day and thought it was a good-un. Maybe someone will read it in the winter and enjoy it.



Winter Clothes

On a long and lonely track,
Walking cold and wet;
We see the strangled face of winter-
Deathly white.
His tongue licks the ground
Leaving a trail of ice-
His breath...
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The Opulent twilight

I hold you like a flower
Up to the moon
In reverence
In the opulent twilight
Of the scented darkness
In which you sparkle and shine.
fentopal:
Thanks, Exis_T. I always appreciate a good compliment. biggrin
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Smoke In The Sky

A paranoid exhalation
Into turbulent Loneliness,
Thoughts mix with the wind
That cries against the concrete
And whispers through the grass.

The silent mouth sucks out the night
And darkness falls
Like a black tear
From a blind eye.

A heavy mist of peace
Descends into my body of stone
As the cold shiver of nakedness
Invades my soul.
Is there...
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iyce:
you're back!! kiss
iyce:
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I wrote this poem last night. It took me 6 hours and I finished it at 6a.m. My eyes and brain were burned dry. It is called "Blossom." I hope someone out there might like it.


Blossom

You are like a flower that realises it is growing in a green field with a fragile stem bending in the breeze. You see many others similar to...
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iyce:
thanks for your words sweetie smile
soma__:
thanks for your nice comments, I enjoy reading your poetry. keep on writing!
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I wrote this poem tonight and it's called "You And I"

You And I

I look into your eyes
And you melt my heart.
I watch you smile
And you flood me with joy.
I hear your voice
And you calm my thoughts.
I listen to you speak
And your words cleanse my soul.

When you laugh
I am immersed in sweet song.
When you...
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iyce:
Hey you...
that's a sweet poem wink
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I saw a television programme tonight. It was a debate on world affairs and the group members were all politicians except for one: he was a poet. I was really impressed by the way he conducted himself. You could see that his primary concern was to listen and to understand. The politicians were interested in being "right" and so they were trying really hard to...
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soma__:
I'm not sure why you asked me to be your friend since you have so far not left any comments on my journal but since you are a newbie and don't have any friends yet, I'll add you. But try to get to know people around here a little bit too. Its rad that you like Magritte... ceci n'est pas un pipe? hehe