In the hopes somebody somewhere can and/or will give me feedback. Does the following unfinished free verse (May be a couple places that are lacking in iambic form...fucking lit classes) poem suck or not suck? Quesitons, comments, thoughts, opinions, flaming, whatever are welcome. Or not. I'm easy.
Secure complacency has split.
A portcullis has seized.
A thrusting spear protruding, prying, twisting; free
The Angels; free...
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Secure complacency has split.
A portcullis has seized.
A thrusting spear protruding, prying, twisting; free
The Angels; free...
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dasharer:
Like I said...
Long have I gone without remembering any of my dreams. For some reason I remember all of them now. All are panic dreams about my friend. Long, horrible, and vivid. I am afraid to sleep knowing what sleep will bring.
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jivefree:
maybe you just need someone to spoon with at night 
cecelia:
Yikes, you're the first person I've heard say they enjoy this! LOL! 
I have decided to get a tattoo. Now all I need to do is come up with an image to embody a plethora of ideals into two conflicting yet complimentary tattoos. Or I could just get some random shit that I like since creativity was never really my forte.
I think I like the decemberists...
"Find him, bind him
Tie him to a pole and...
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I think I like the decemberists...
"Find him, bind him
Tie him to a pole and...
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Please tell me that woman are instinctive creatures that can read my every emotional response because:
A. That would make relationships alot easier for somebody like me and,
B. If I end up being like Kristin Scott Thomas' character in Four Weddings and a Funeral where I love my friend and they honestly had no idea about it, that would just suck.
A. That would make relationships alot easier for somebody like me and,
B. If I end up being like Kristin Scott Thomas' character in Four Weddings and a Funeral where I love my friend and they honestly had no idea about it, that would just suck.
jivefree:
Or you could just say something I guess I"m too late 
I guess I"m too late 
reversehalo:
Yeah, I was in the Marine Corps for 4 years. Oh, and chicks suck.
I've been wanting a tattoo for a couple years now and could never come up with anything that I wanted. Until recently. I have no fucking idea how to come up with an image from the idea in my head. Basically I'm thinking of it being of Antigone daughter of Oedipus as per the play Antigone by Sophocles. So how the fuck do I embody...
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fuck it.
My thoughts are jumbled today. What was once a classroom of asian school children sitting taut and erect has become a bunch of autistic american kids with addsd and an ocd.
I'm neither happy nor sad, fat nor thin, sane nor insane, good nor evil, intelligent nor feebleminded. I am the epitome of mediocrity. I hate myself for it.
I need some direction in my...
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I'm neither happy nor sad, fat nor thin, sane nor insane, good nor evil, intelligent nor feebleminded. I am the epitome of mediocrity. I hate myself for it.
I need some direction in my...
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judas:
Whatever reason he may have for suddenly keeping his distance, I sincerely hope he gets over it in a hurry. I hope he remembers why he persued you and started dating you in the first place. I hope he shows up on your doorstep at 3am in the freezing cold with tears in his eyes saying he is sorry.
me too.
me too.
fuck the sun's coming up...and here I was doing so well at being moderately normal for once in my life 
cecelia:
What, no friends? You can be my friend.
Damn it I hate this picture. I'll have to borrow a friends digital camera and make a new one. Maybe tomorrow 