nicely done. I like it. No stranger to the GEEtar I see. My internet connection is terrible though, it kept buffering and stopping and loading. So i'd start to get into it and then it would just cut out, pissed me off. I guess I'll just wait till it gets released on Sony records, :-)

You play beautifully, just wish the sound came through more clearly. Nice work!!

The constant buffering ruined the experience, but the song is wonderful and your voice is very pleasant to listen to. Definately keep writing!

i would love to have that song wake me up every morning....that was very nice.....thank you

great, you should start a lite to link to, head-banging is bad though

even better the second time....played straight through no lag...i really love this song....again ...thank you

You are amazing Elsie, & your music is beautiful !!!!!

that was good. i wrote a song similarly to that progression. theres a video. holler if you want to hear me.

I hate to make this comment... but it's the audio engineer in me... a lot of sound recordings accent the "s" in vocals and there's a technique used for taking out the "s"... it's called a d-ser. If you go in to record at a studio or have someone record you with professional equipment... ask them to D-S your vocals and it'll take away that accent on the "s". Just a little suggestion... sounds great though!!! ^_^ And the recording quality of the video is astounding. Keep in mind I'm not saying that you're just insane on the "S" sounds... it's just the recording that accents it and happens with lots of vocalists especially in your style of music. As said, sounds great! Keep making good music!!!!!!

it was so beautiful

Really good song--I liked it a lot! You occasionally seem to try to cram a little too much into each line--maybe it's just the phrasing, I don't know--Bruce Springsteen did this on his first album. Joni Mitchell was the master at doing this effectively--if there's a line you want to extend, maybe you could throw an extra change in there (switching to a minor?) or something if it's important to get that lyric in.

Tossing in an extra bar is admittedly an eccentric way of writing, and can be hard to pull off, but if the lyric is important to you then it can act almost as a hook, throwing off the listener's expectations a little, adding a little musical interest so all the verses aren't quite identical musically. Anyway, I think it sounds better than rushing your syllables.

But definitely do what you want! Sorry, just interested!

yea! *clap clap clap* very soothing voice. Cool song =^)

I'm going to miss your talent and your absolutely beautiful voice. ='[

I will come back and listen to all of these again later; if I tried to do it now, I would just cry my f'ing eyes out. You, and your beautiful voice will be missed, sweet angel. <3

Thank you for leaveing this memory of you.