I like the first design the best - but see what Ms Tattoo has come up with when she tidying the design up - might blow your other ideas outta the water.
although i do like the internal bit of the 2nd one - although i don't know how that would translate in ink.
I really like the second one but im not sure how it would work in ink but i love the first one. go for that. who's doing it for you? I spent all day at work listening to jt, bowie and city and colour it was awesome. A nightmare about moving?! that's odd, the tattoo bit isn't. i know i had one before i got mine done.