wow. i love the imagery. i love the power that poem emits. i can relate to the feelings conveyed by those werds.
i love 'trying to catch my second chance to make the right first impression.' i sure know that one real well.
i love the wings (words) falling flat analogy to emotion read off paper.
i could go rave on about all that i like about that poem, but i'll spare you the extra werds.
what's this rjd2 +dj shdow business? they've collaborated? splendid..