I'm no professional, but I have been a member of the site for a long time and I think I could offer you some tips about your set and what the staff seems to be looking for these days...
What you did well was the variety of poses and facial expressions. A lot of times girls have the tendency of cocking their heads to the same side or something silly like that... On the other hand, in some of the photos, you look a little nervous, not sure if that's the case, but it looks as though some of the photos took you by surprise.
Lighting: it really makes or breaks a set and can't be over-emphasized. Back in the old days, you could sometimes get away without submitting a truly professional quality set, but not anymore. There are sets done by wonderful photographers and beautiful models that get rejected every day, so attention to detail is paramount.
Think about your setting as well. Look back through the archives and see if a particular theme has been played out several times and try to come up with something really original that makes your set stand out, but be super-sensitive that it's not too racy or offensive in nature, as that has happened several times in the past.
"supernovice" gave great advice. Other stuff I see here is every single frame of the shoot submitted. Every frame. Then it's Photoshopped to death. Don't do that either, please.
I'm no professional, but I have been a member of the site for a long time and I think I could offer you some tips about your set and what the staff seems to be looking for these days...
What you did well was the variety of poses and facial expressions. A lot of times girls have the tendency of cocking their heads to the same side or something silly like that... On the other hand, in some of the photos, you look a little nervous, not sure if that's the case, but it looks as though some of the photos took you by surprise.
Lighting: it really makes or breaks a set and can't be over-emphasized. Back in the old days, you could sometimes get away without submitting a truly professional quality set, but not anymore. There are sets done by wonderful photographers and beautiful models that get rejected every day, so attention to detail is paramount.
Think about your setting as well. Look back through the archives and see if a particular theme has been played out several times and try to come up with something really original that makes your set stand out, but be super-sensitive that it's not too racy or offensive in nature, as that has happened several times in the past.
Hope that helps. Good luck!