sweetbutch:

no no

you said it fine, that was definitely a young hunk of hank

but i was wondering if you, like me, could marvel at how old that young man sounded, and all that he accomplished in a bitter, drunken, pill addicted and short short life
caffeinemonkey:
I can't help but question or feel sorry for your protagonist. I am not sure if it is the taboo of such a young women with a man so much older or if is her vices, cigarettes, JD, and even the need to hear that her non gay friend would do her.
Well done!
joemallik:
I liked the story. Maybe 'cos I'm 60. biggrin
chainlink:
I KNOW WHO YOU ARE ! smile

Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Great story. That's very touching and in a way, kind of funny.
But now I feel a little saggy and want to go check my lips. wink

kiss
princelogos:
Nice piece of writing;......really.
Kind of a reversal on 'The Rosey Crusificion" , or on Henry Miller altogether.
Your real name isn't Mara, is it ? biggrin
lizaeth:
Hope your feeling better! kiss
princelogos:
Thank you for your nice reply, (I don't get many cause I'm such a pushy old bastard) biggrin
" Heck", gotta love it.
princelogos:
being a pest as usual: I just want to ad, that, your writing is very good, and I want to encourage you to do more, as you may have a viable audience, and may possible profit from that, both in capital and self expansion.
amilie:
I just had a bit of a look through your pics you have some funny shit my dear it will keep me amuzed for some time
princelogos:
Thinking we have something to say, is a real problem that we share.
I think your avatar is "kickin," and I think I like you, I like your style, for sure.
I relate to the need to write, I used to write, like, a lot;..... spent 6 yrs. on a manuscript.
I finally destroyed it after getting a mega-block, and became tired of feeling like a fraud, everytime someone asked about my book.*


*(NEVER<NEVER<NEVER, tell anyone what you are writing, they will murder it, kill your impotess, and leave you totally blocked and shamed.) blackeyed puke skull
ferkixlll:
Kilty and The Queen, biggrin biggrin biggrin
He should have tied a pretty ribbon on it. wink