Your clumsiness does not lend itself to being a henchman. If you join then you will learn the ways of being a superstar and eventually build up your own following.
Your extended obsession with my "poop" does not entitle you to an automatic point...hurling it towards Alisa on the other hand would indeed merit a point.
The days and nights felt like years whilst you were away... with dry lips and a throat of sandpaper, I found what strength I had left to rise from the crumpled fetal position in which my body laid upon the roof top as the soft digital hums sang the arrival of yet another imprint to be burned into memory...
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Knecht... Baby... Your entry... Very well done... That was soooo intense... As I read your words out loud, I could feel every muscle in m'shoulders and arms and hell.. every where else tighten...Yet again, you leave me Breathless... You seem to have a habit of doing this to your readers...
Darkened eyes
Fire burning youthful veins
Tasteless void
I believe my 'mindfulness' has a tendency to frighten those I come in contact with... They seem to think I'm complicated because of the way I covey things to them, even in a poetic sense... Either that or they just don't get it and say "huh?"... I don't want to go through life without knowing the beauty of art, the language in which we weave into an art and the communication between two individuals where no words are needed because they simply know... To be able to experience that with another human being would be just... oh man... ... but anyway, I could go on and on..
p.s. Yay! S'wonderful that your class is coming to an end... More RnR for you! I know your mind n'body are thankful... Just try not to get burned this time.. hehe
thank you valiant warrior...your deeds and actions have been mighty and i am truly grateful for your generous protection. if i am ever in need of your services my gallant protector you will be the first i come to. you have battled greatly and victory is ours...hi attempt at war was started out of love and had ended that way. you are truly noble and mighty.
I too was lost as to what to recommend for the next, but then it came to me as I was walking to my car this morning. Within the heat of a Louisiana summer, a most welcomed cool breeze carried the crisp scent of fresh rain and another idea of verse, which happens to be yet another set of 4our. Spring, summer, fall, winter.
Lambent eyes close - breathless
Softness coiled under sheets of linen
Reflecting in the warmth of Spring
Oooo... we haven't done the senses either... touch, smell, taste, hear, sight. That could get interesting... hehe
edit to say: i was here first darkbunny
[Edited on Jun 24, 2003]