I likes it. Great job my dear.

The only thing that sounds weird to me is the line "moaning hotly as you groan."

It makes me want to hand you a kitten.

Dunno..I'm not that talented.

Maybe.... something like.. "moaning as you thrust deep" or "moaning deeply as you thrust"

I kid.

Actually, it is a pretty good poem

Likes it better.

But I still want to hand you a kitten.

Kittens are fuzzy.

I like. You definatly get your point across

But, are you fuzzy?

PROOF!!!!

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

That was an omg-hawt-now-I'm-tingly-in-teh-pants

Antoher reminder that I'm not gettin' any.

Yeah, I do. At least you got some on stand-by, I got nothing. <_<

It'd take an act of Congress to get me laid right now. Even then, they'd fuck it up somehow. >_<