fredhincanada:
@ivydenali, @laritxs, @nannakya, @silentobjectorx, would you like me to tag you in future posts or no?
nannakya:
of course darling!
fredhincanada:
@nannakya than it shall be done!  I hope you enjoy the story. ❤️
ravenivy:
❤️❤️
fredhincanada:
@ravenivy are you ok being tagged?
tc_nikon:
@fredhincanada 👍🏾
headshot:
That's a twist...A 13-year-old boy turns out to be a psychopath. I am discouraged by the fact that the boy coldly beat an elderly couple with a shovel to buy time for the main character. And so I guess I need to run to the car and get out of this place. We are waiting for a long trip, where the boy will explain that there was no other choice. Of the arguments against his actions, there will only be "it contradicts the norms of morality." The question is, will zombies be distracted by every easy victim? We will find out in the next issue!
samihain:
Wow what a twist with the son's actions! Great job on this!
johnnydiscard:
I’m too out of it to read this now, but I’ll check it out when I’m feeling up to it.
fredhincanada:
@tc_nikon 👍
fredhincanada:
@headshot  I am so grateful that you give me such thought out answers and continue on with the story.  I appreciate you so much!  And yeah, it's a twist that occurred to me a few days ago. It came across very well, I think.
fredhincanada:
@samihain Thank you!  I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.   💕
fredhincanada:
@johnnydiscard please take your time, my friend!
helainked:
Wow!!! I love this twist! James seems to be a very complex character to develop but amazing, I like the approach and I think you have to know very well how to fit the fact that someone is a psychopath but obviously feels affective emotions for his father because obviously psychopaths have reduced connections between the ventromedial prefrontal cortex, part of the brain responsible for feelings like guilt and empathy and the amygdala that is related to anxiety and fear. It is suspected that this is due to several possible reasons due to incorrect neuronal migration in the prenatal period, heredity or epigenetics, it is not clear, what is clear is that there is evidence that the structure of the brain is different, they are still neurodiverse people, they are like their brain is .... so I find the development of this character very interesting and I want more!!!! You are a genius my dear friend!!! 💜💜💜
juliju:
Just read this and I agree with @helainked and well feeling disturbed about what going on next 🤣 it's hard knowing someone is thinking about all this stuff and maybe being like persuaded you know I'm use to reading the whole thing whiteout having a saying of what's gonna happen next
wolfwood1203:
Damn. That boy was already living in the zombie apocalypse, everyone else is just catching up.
johnnydiscard:
Damn, James is even colder than I had imagined. The old woman probably wouldn't have been able to keep up even without his kneecapping her, but I guess he needed to make sure.
fredhincanada:
@helainked Oh.  I just wanted to write in a psychopath.  haha.  I'm glad you like it and I hope I can keep you engaged in future instalments!
fredhincanada:
@juliju Disturbed about what's going on next?  Do you have an idea of where this is going? 😏 I hope you are enjoying it.
fredhincanada:
@wolfwood1203 Let's just say he was already in the right mindset.  Lol.  I hope you are liking it.
fredhincanada:
@johnnydiscard I guess the next entry with James in it might have more insight... Lol.
cerebus666:
Finally had time for Part 2 and I'm not disappointed. James is acting now less like Dexter Morgan, but more like his adopted son, Cody. Not the innocent boy from the TV-Show, but the boy from the Dexter-Novels by Jeff Lindsay. There he and his sister Astor are also only children but already cold hearted killers, who walk the path of Dexter. Hope that there will be a chapter narrated by James, so we can learn more about the real James (and not what he is pretending to be)!
fredhincanada:
@cerebus666, when I first read your response, I thought you wrote "and I'm disappointed" and I was like: "oh, some Austrian Security Guard is going to get eaten in this story"  lol.  But now I understand and I thank you, my friend.
cerebus666:
"Eaten alive by the Zombies" sounds like the title of an Italian horror flick 😁! Please, I'd rather die of old-age 😂!
fredhincanada:
In the zombie apocalypse, old age is defined differently.  Lol.  @cerebus666 , you'd probably already past the average age for it.