Stuck in a rut
There is
Lack of air
Lack of light
Lack of colour
Are these my words
Or yours
Get in my head
I'm free
I'm ignoring sleep
I'm wasting time
I'm moving fast.
Stuck in a rut
Meaningless actions
Stuck in a rut
Set it alight
We're moving forward
We're stuck in a rut
Let go of my hand
You're stuck in a rut
move forward
move forward
move forward.
That was crap. I can't remember the las time I wrote.
The above is a good example of why I stopped.
There is
Lack of air
Lack of light
Lack of colour
Are these my words
Or yours
Get in my head
I'm free
I'm ignoring sleep
I'm wasting time
I'm moving fast.
Stuck in a rut
Meaningless actions
Stuck in a rut
Set it alight
We're moving forward
We're stuck in a rut
Let go of my hand
You're stuck in a rut
move forward
move forward
move forward.
That was crap. I can't remember the las time I wrote.
The above is a good example of why I stopped.
barbados:
Great writing
lexiphanic:
Whether it's good writing or not is irrelevant. It is important to get the feelings out on paper (or screen). Stream of consciousness is a great way to do it. 