I really like this. You should definitely finish it. I think its a great opening to what I'm guessing is a very interesting story about an interesting creature. Good luck writing the next section, I doubt you'll need it. You have a unique and straightforward yet eloquent style of writing that I enjoy. All the best.

Back east is Asheville NC... little tiny regional airport..
thanx for wanting to help

Do you know those Cadbury Crunch bars, with the honeycomb in them? Oh man... I can't wait to have one of those in Ireland. I'll probably be disciplined and just have one, but I've gotta have it.

He could have at least apologized if he was going to send an email to you anyway.

I wouldn't mind one bit.