imagine what's it's going to be like for me to pee while it's healing!!!
uh oh!

nice. my only critique is minor and stupid. The way it's written it took me a while to catch the rhyme scheme. Id suggest rewriting it like:

And all Ive learned is nothing tastes better than a second chance
My tempered stance
Has stood the test of time
But all it takes is a look in your eyes to make my knees buckle
Weve chuckled
Over small talk, irony and etc.


but thats assuming you arent planing on actually spiting it. Cause when you do the way it's written wont matter

yeah i figured as much. which is why i said my critique was minor and stupid

who said i wasnt....