So, I am trying to transition to a solo singer/songwriter, and I wouldn't mind some feedback on my lyrics. Please be honest <3 (It was written for my better half)
When I see your smiling face
It takes me to my favorite place
You know it
I'll always squeeze and hold you tight
Around your body through the night
You know it
When I looked into your eyes
That's the moment that I realized
I love you.
And when you reached and held my hand
I began to understand
You love me
Baby, it's true
We've been through so much.
But maybe, it's you
That I'm craving to touch.
Where will we be in a year?
Hopefully you'll be right here
In my arms
But if you should go away
In my heart you'll always stay
My darling
When I looked into your eyes
That's the moment that I realized
I love you.
And When you reached and held my hand
I began to understand
You love me
maniasuccubus:
Nice ❤️ hope to see more