alright, new member here, first blog, figure i'd go ahead and start with some of my poetry since that's something i feel can really define me, usually i stumble over my words and don't know what to say haha so, let me know what you think, any feedback is great cause i'm really trying to work this into a lifetime sorta thing, alright here we go
Stargazers:
Bound to my thoughts,
Sprawled in the bed for days,
Weeks,
Lifetimes,
Stirred awake from my super-consciousness
By the soft, liquid sun invading the foggy windows of my eyes.
Life becomes sharp.
The thoughts run away so quickly,
Only to be caught in my halo,
Circling and
Circling and
Circling and.
The stars shine the brightest.
Famous and unrelenting, they burn,
Until I close my eyes again.
Never to dream,
Just to escape the accelerating orbits
Of all those famous stars
My mind has bound to my being.
alright, all done for my first blog, will post again shortly-ish
Stargazers:
Bound to my thoughts,
Sprawled in the bed for days,
Weeks,
Lifetimes,
Stirred awake from my super-consciousness
By the soft, liquid sun invading the foggy windows of my eyes.
Life becomes sharp.
The thoughts run away so quickly,
Only to be caught in my halo,
Circling and
Circling and
Circling and.
The stars shine the brightest.
Famous and unrelenting, they burn,
Until I close my eyes again.
Never to dream,
Just to escape the accelerating orbits
Of all those famous stars
My mind has bound to my being.
alright, all done for my first blog, will post again shortly-ish
I love poetry - though I've never been able to write something myself, as I'm more skilled for prose - and I think yours is good.
Hope to read more!